I'll be the first to say that I'm not very good at poetry, but I saw The Phantom of the Opera yesterday and it really spoke to me because music is basically my life. So no flames please, but constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks!


A mask that masks just half a soul

A rose of deepest blood

The darkest night,

Forbidden embrace

Of one eternal love

Find the darkness inside you

Let go of the light

Feel the crowd all around you

In unspeakable night

Two souls in endless time

A mask of purest white

Light the candles of passion

Give yourself to the night

One love for one lifetime

One song and one chance

One moment forever

A rose and a mask

Find the darkness inside you

Let go of the light

Feel the crowd all around you

In unspeakable night

Two souls in endless time

A mask of purest white

Light the candles of passion

Give yourself to the night

A mask that masks just half a soul

A rose of deepest blood...

Find the darkness inside you

Give yourself to the night


I'm really not too much of a poet, but I try. Reviews are very much appreciated!

etherealfire