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Hello! Okay, so I have this end of year English assignment, and I'm aloud to write some fan fiction for it. This took a little bit of explaining, as my teacher had no clue what fan fiction was. :-) Anyway, I'd like you all to take a look at it and give me lots of constructive critisism, as I have to turn this in. So please read and review and just help me out here, please! I don't want get an F! Thanks!