This is a story written by a fan for fun.
So please don't sue me. Cause I don't have any money.
His Hated Whole
Ranma 1/2 Fanfiction
By Weirdman Weirdo
Thoughts-**
Descriptions-{}
Chapter ! Ranma Is It?
{Written on Postcard}
Bringing Ranma. Will be there soon.
Soun " Oh happy day. Oh happy day. It has finally come.
Kasumi! Nabiki! Akane!"
{Well the beginning is the same until a point. And I'm going to jump right to it.
Just remember Ranma's a guy this time.}
{The scene outside the Tendou's residence.}
Ranma "Put me down Pop! I said I ain't marrying no girl I've never meet."
{The panda simply grumbled as it carried Ranma toward the door.}
Kasumi "Guests?"
Nabiki "Hey, maybe its Ranma."
{The Tendo family went to see who was at their door.}
Soun "Is it you Saotome?"
Kasumi "Maybe he'll be older then me."
Akane "Hmph, What's with all this excitement anyway?
Ranma "Okay, you can let go already pop!"
Kasumi "Is this your friend, father?"
Nabiki "You trained with a panda father? Isn't that just a little unnatural ?"
Soun "You are......"
Ranma "I'm Saotome Ranma. Sorry about the commotion."
Soun "Oh welcome! I'm so glad to see you!"
Nabiki *He's gorgeous!*
"So you did come."
Soun "Yes, I'm very happy your here Ranma. Now where is old friend Genma? Saotome Genma!
Genma where are you! Oh, this is just like the old days. Genma!"
Ranma "Ah, Tendo-san, my father will be along soon."
{The panda holds a sign up behind Soun. The sign reads...
I'm right here Soun.
But it makes the sign disappear when Soun turn around to look at Ranma.}
Soun "Of course that be just like him. Let's all go inside and wait for him then."
Kasumi "I will go make tea father."
Soun "Thankyou Kasumi. Ranma will your father be here by then?"
Ranma "Yes, umm, I'm sure my father will be here then."
Akane "So Ranma is it? I'm Akane. I've heard you were on a training trip to China with your father."
Ranma "Yea,but it really didn't turn out the way he wanted it to."
Akane "So you studied kempo then?"
Ranma "That and a few others."
Akane "Would you like a little match with me?"
Ranma "Err..Ok."
{Ranma mistook the gleam in her eyes and the small smile on her face for total the opposite of what it meant.
Nabiki was to distracted by the big panda walking around the house to catch Akane at her little plan.}
Akane*If I beat Ranma in a match. It will show father his not worthy of being a heir to the dojo.*
"Don't worry I won't hurt you."
*Much.*
Ranma "If you say so."
{Now in the Dojo: Akane sets herself in a karate stance. While Ranma seams to just stand at the other end.
A minute goes by before Akane runs up and swings at Ranma. The punch never touches him.
Dodging it easily, Ranma proceeds to avoid to the following kicks and other attacks for five more minutes.}
Akane *Why can't I hit him? Is he some how reading my moves??*
"What's wrong? Why aren't you attacking me!"
{For a long time this continued. Akane becoming winded as Ranma appears unaffected by the match.}
Akane *Okay! No more playing. This time it's for real!*
{Akane uses a full powered punch, which sadly only succeeds in destroying the wall of the dojo behind Ranma.
She looks up from the destruction to see Ranma tapping on her shoulder.}
Ranma " Hehhehh...Owff!"
{A large mallet emerged from hammerspace and slammed into Ranma's midsection!
He few across the dojo and into the wall on the other side.}
Akane *He laughed at me! That arrogant pig! No pervert!*
"Arrr, I 'm going to get you for that Ranma!"
{Anger rose in Akane to its brink. She quickly charged toward Ranma. Hammer held high!}
Ranma * Oi! This girl not playing nice any more. *
{ Ranma dislodged himself from the wall just before Akane's hammer smashed into it.}
Ranma *Darn, I don't want to hav't hurt her, but I'm not going to concede!*
{Akane's hits on Ranma were few and far apart, but wall and wood splintered.
Some of this debris was hitting Ranma causing minor injury.}
Akane "Stand still coward and let me hit you!
{Akane's swings were becoming more and more radical as her control was lost to her anger.}
Ranma *Ah, It seams I've already won.*
{In the end Akane was on her knees in the middle of the dojo, her dimensional hammer stuck in the floor.
Out of breath, both of her hands released its handle and went to the floor to support her.
Slowly the large mallet faded back into hammer space. }
{Ranma wasn't close enough to hear her whisper between harsh breaths.}
Akane " Huh..I...huh....hate.....huh..huh....boys.....huh....huh..."
{The match was over and it was quite clear who won. Ranma didn't know what to do now.
Luckily he didn't have to find out, for a call from the entrance of the dojo interrupted his thoughts.}
Kasumi "Oh, My!"
{Ranma turn to see Kasumi and Nabiki at the door. Nabiki was eyeing the destruction intently.
Ranma was about to open he mouth and say, "Its not my fault!", but he didn't get a chance.
For Kasumi quickly interrupted him again.}
Kasumi "Ranma! Wouldn't you like to get a bath?"
{The question came quick and seamed a little out of place. Ranma became ever more uncertain.}
Ranma "Umm, no not really."
Kasumi "But your all sweaty from the match and being on the road for awhile."
{Kasumi's words were polite but a little stern and they had a certain urgency to them.
Nabiki had by this time gotting behind Ranma and was talking to Akane.}
Ranma *She doesn't want me here. Well, I wasn't going to stay here with this crazy violent tomboy anyway.
I wonder what made her lose control like that?*
"Well ok, I guess will go get one then."
{Then he added almost as an afterthought.....}
Ranma "Nice match Akane."
{And hurried away to the house.
As soon as he was gone, Kasumi went over to talk with Akane and Nabiki.
Soon she could hear Akane's voice. It was a little shaky from the battle but still held to some of the anger
had toward Ranma.}
Akane "I couldn't hit him Nabiki. I tried but I just..... He must of been using some trick. But I can take him.
I won't lose to some perverted boy!"
Nabiki *You already have Akane. Why can't you see that?*
Kasumi "Oh My! I've forgot about father. He fainted when he saw the panda turned into Saotome-san.
Akane could you please go check up on him while I clean up this mess here."
Akane "Wha.. Oh, umm sure."
*What she mean by the panda turned into Saotome-san?*
{Akane left the dojo then, not to concerned about her father. Her defeat by Ranma weighed heavily on her mind.}
Nabiki * How am I going to find the money to play all of this.*
{The damage to the dojo was quite extensive. Large holes were now in its walls and small craters in the floor. Kasumi was beginning to clean up the rubble.
But as Nabiki turn to leave she call to her.}
Kasumi "Nabiki could I please talk to you?"
Nabiki *So this is why she wanted both of them to leave?*
"What on you mind big sis?"
Kasumi "I...I think that we made a mistake with Akane."
Nabiki "What do you mean sis?"
*As if I don't know the mistake they made*
Kasumi " We've were very easy on her after mother died. Now I think we were to easy.
We let her do things that mother would have never let us do.
Things might not have come to this if father had kept teaching her.
{Kasumi voice was becoming more distraught as regret and the moment was forcing her to make a decision she didn't want to make.}
Kasumi " And that's why Akane must marry Ranma."
Nabiki "What!! Do you want thing like this to happen all the time?"
*What are you thinking Kasumi?*
Kasumi "But don't you see they already do. You told me Akane use that mallet of hers to hit some kids at school when they make her angry.
The same mallet that did this to the dojo. She a danger to everyone around her. And it's to late for us to help her. Please Nabiki you've must help me do this.
What if...What if one day she hits someone to hard and......"
{Kasumi was crying in full now. And she had many reason too.}
Nabiki "Do you think Ranma can give her the control she needs?"
*Why Ranma? I was just thinking I could start to like him. He's not rich but....he is kind of cute.*
Kasumi "Ranma is the only one that could stop her."
* I'm so sorry Akane.*
Nabiki *That's not an answer!*
" Ok, I will help you get Akane engaged to Ranma. But only if you tell me why don't like Ranma."
{What this? Kasumi don't like Ranma? But she likes everybody.}
{It's and alternate universe remember!}
{Oh, right.}
Kasumi "I don't like Ranma.... Because.....Because of what he may do to Akane."
*Ranma if you h........*
{And that's about as far as thought like that go in Kasumi's head.}
{Inside the house Soun and Akane were being told the story of Jhusenkyou. Kasumi and Nabiki entered the room which they were in just as Genma Saotome was finishing the story.}
Genma "I came flying out of the spring rising up to hit Ranma with a powerful strike. But I taught Ranma be prepared for any thing. He twisted in the air and grabbed my paw.
Spun me around and threw me toward the ground. Of course I was undaunted by this, but Ranma stop the match to look for me. Didn't know I was a panda. So....
{ Nabiki, who had already heard the story with Kasumi while Akane and Ranma were have their match. Took this time to ask a simple question. }
Nabiki " If you had hit Ranma what spring would he have fallen into?"
Genma "What?!"
Nabiki "What spring would have Ranma fallen into if you didn't miss?"
Akane " Yes please tell us."
Soun "Come on old friend I would like to know as well."
{Genma Saotome mumble something very quietly.}
Nabiki "What was that?"
Genma "I said Spring of drowned girl."
Akane "Ha, It would of served that pervert right if did!"
{Ranma was just coming in the room, his bath now finished. He caught the end of what Akane said.}
Ranma "What would serve me right?!"
Akane "It would serve you right if you turn into a girl."
Ranma "Why would I want to turn into a silly girl?"
Akane "It better than been a stupid pervert boy!"
Ranma "What did you just call me?"
Genma "Hum! Soun we're all here. I think now would be a good time to get Ranma to choose."
Soun " Oh, right Saotome. Ranma these are my daughters, Kasumi.......
Kasumi "Oh, father he is much to young for me. You know young men bore me."
Soun "Oh, right Nabiki then."
Nabiki "Father I'm not a martial artist. Don't you think a martial artist should be the one to inherit the dojo?"
Soun "Ah, good thinking Nabiki! It's only fitting that Akane should be the one to marry Ranma."
{There was a long moments pause before Akane's answer came.}
Akane "I Hate You!"
{Then she turned an ran from the room. A second later Soun was in tears.
Although she was facing toward her father, Ranma, Kasumi, And Nabiki all knew Akane wasn't speak of him.
If only Ranma could of heard what Nabiki was thinking maybe...maybe he would have felt better.....maybe.}
Nabiki * Saotome Ranma, Sorry about this.*
The end of chapter 1.
Author's Note: {Don't get me wrong, I like Akane. And anyone can see she's Ranma's true love. That's as obvious as Tenchi and Ryoko.
Which holds true in most of their universes. But I've some how got to see Akane as a spoiled brat. Yes that exactly! A spoiled brat who always got her way until Ranma came along.
And that's why she does most of the things she does. Because she can get away with it. Like hitting Ranma and so on. Anyway this story is not an alternate timeline really.
It's some of an alternate universe because I didn't want to get rid of Ranma-chan. {Who is my favorite character!} So I opted for the twin sister setup.
But that doesn't matter till later. JA!}
WM "Tell me what you think. [email protected] mailto:[email protected]
So please don't sue me. Cause I don't have any money.
His Hated Whole
Ranma 1/2 Fanfiction
By Weirdman Weirdo
Thoughts-**
Descriptions-{}
Chapter ! Ranma Is It?
{Written on Postcard}
Bringing Ranma. Will be there soon.
Soun " Oh happy day. Oh happy day. It has finally come.
Kasumi! Nabiki! Akane!"
{Well the beginning is the same until a point. And I'm going to jump right to it.
Just remember Ranma's a guy this time.}
{The scene outside the Tendou's residence.}
Ranma "Put me down Pop! I said I ain't marrying no girl I've never meet."
{The panda simply grumbled as it carried Ranma toward the door.}
Kasumi "Guests?"
Nabiki "Hey, maybe its Ranma."
{The Tendo family went to see who was at their door.}
Soun "Is it you Saotome?"
Kasumi "Maybe he'll be older then me."
Akane "Hmph, What's with all this excitement anyway?
Ranma "Okay, you can let go already pop!"
Kasumi "Is this your friend, father?"
Nabiki "You trained with a panda father? Isn't that just a little unnatural ?"
Soun "You are......"
Ranma "I'm Saotome Ranma. Sorry about the commotion."
Soun "Oh welcome! I'm so glad to see you!"
Nabiki *He's gorgeous!*
"So you did come."
Soun "Yes, I'm very happy your here Ranma. Now where is old friend Genma? Saotome Genma!
Genma where are you! Oh, this is just like the old days. Genma!"
Ranma "Ah, Tendo-san, my father will be along soon."
{The panda holds a sign up behind Soun. The sign reads...
I'm right here Soun.
But it makes the sign disappear when Soun turn around to look at Ranma.}
Soun "Of course that be just like him. Let's all go inside and wait for him then."
Kasumi "I will go make tea father."
Soun "Thankyou Kasumi. Ranma will your father be here by then?"
Ranma "Yes, umm, I'm sure my father will be here then."
Akane "So Ranma is it? I'm Akane. I've heard you were on a training trip to China with your father."
Ranma "Yea,but it really didn't turn out the way he wanted it to."
Akane "So you studied kempo then?"
Ranma "That and a few others."
Akane "Would you like a little match with me?"
Ranma "Err..Ok."
{Ranma mistook the gleam in her eyes and the small smile on her face for total the opposite of what it meant.
Nabiki was to distracted by the big panda walking around the house to catch Akane at her little plan.}
Akane*If I beat Ranma in a match. It will show father his not worthy of being a heir to the dojo.*
"Don't worry I won't hurt you."
*Much.*
Ranma "If you say so."
{Now in the Dojo: Akane sets herself in a karate stance. While Ranma seams to just stand at the other end.
A minute goes by before Akane runs up and swings at Ranma. The punch never touches him.
Dodging it easily, Ranma proceeds to avoid to the following kicks and other attacks for five more minutes.}
Akane *Why can't I hit him? Is he some how reading my moves??*
"What's wrong? Why aren't you attacking me!"
{For a long time this continued. Akane becoming winded as Ranma appears unaffected by the match.}
Akane *Okay! No more playing. This time it's for real!*
{Akane uses a full powered punch, which sadly only succeeds in destroying the wall of the dojo behind Ranma.
She looks up from the destruction to see Ranma tapping on her shoulder.}
Ranma " Hehhehh...Owff!"
{A large mallet emerged from hammerspace and slammed into Ranma's midsection!
He few across the dojo and into the wall on the other side.}
Akane *He laughed at me! That arrogant pig! No pervert!*
"Arrr, I 'm going to get you for that Ranma!"
{Anger rose in Akane to its brink. She quickly charged toward Ranma. Hammer held high!}
Ranma * Oi! This girl not playing nice any more. *
{ Ranma dislodged himself from the wall just before Akane's hammer smashed into it.}
Ranma *Darn, I don't want to hav't hurt her, but I'm not going to concede!*
{Akane's hits on Ranma were few and far apart, but wall and wood splintered.
Some of this debris was hitting Ranma causing minor injury.}
Akane "Stand still coward and let me hit you!
{Akane's swings were becoming more and more radical as her control was lost to her anger.}
Ranma *Ah, It seams I've already won.*
{In the end Akane was on her knees in the middle of the dojo, her dimensional hammer stuck in the floor.
Out of breath, both of her hands released its handle and went to the floor to support her.
Slowly the large mallet faded back into hammer space. }
{Ranma wasn't close enough to hear her whisper between harsh breaths.}
Akane " Huh..I...huh....hate.....huh..huh....boys.....huh....huh..."
{The match was over and it was quite clear who won. Ranma didn't know what to do now.
Luckily he didn't have to find out, for a call from the entrance of the dojo interrupted his thoughts.}
Kasumi "Oh, My!"
{Ranma turn to see Kasumi and Nabiki at the door. Nabiki was eyeing the destruction intently.
Ranma was about to open he mouth and say, "Its not my fault!", but he didn't get a chance.
For Kasumi quickly interrupted him again.}
Kasumi "Ranma! Wouldn't you like to get a bath?"
{The question came quick and seamed a little out of place. Ranma became ever more uncertain.}
Ranma "Umm, no not really."
Kasumi "But your all sweaty from the match and being on the road for awhile."
{Kasumi's words were polite but a little stern and they had a certain urgency to them.
Nabiki had by this time gotting behind Ranma and was talking to Akane.}
Ranma *She doesn't want me here. Well, I wasn't going to stay here with this crazy violent tomboy anyway.
I wonder what made her lose control like that?*
"Well ok, I guess will go get one then."
{Then he added almost as an afterthought.....}
Ranma "Nice match Akane."
{And hurried away to the house.
As soon as he was gone, Kasumi went over to talk with Akane and Nabiki.
Soon she could hear Akane's voice. It was a little shaky from the battle but still held to some of the anger
had toward Ranma.}
Akane "I couldn't hit him Nabiki. I tried but I just..... He must of been using some trick. But I can take him.
I won't lose to some perverted boy!"
Nabiki *You already have Akane. Why can't you see that?*
Kasumi "Oh My! I've forgot about father. He fainted when he saw the panda turned into Saotome-san.
Akane could you please go check up on him while I clean up this mess here."
Akane "Wha.. Oh, umm sure."
*What she mean by the panda turned into Saotome-san?*
{Akane left the dojo then, not to concerned about her father. Her defeat by Ranma weighed heavily on her mind.}
Nabiki * How am I going to find the money to play all of this.*
{The damage to the dojo was quite extensive. Large holes were now in its walls and small craters in the floor. Kasumi was beginning to clean up the rubble.
But as Nabiki turn to leave she call to her.}
Kasumi "Nabiki could I please talk to you?"
Nabiki *So this is why she wanted both of them to leave?*
"What on you mind big sis?"
Kasumi "I...I think that we made a mistake with Akane."
Nabiki "What do you mean sis?"
*As if I don't know the mistake they made*
Kasumi " We've were very easy on her after mother died. Now I think we were to easy.
We let her do things that mother would have never let us do.
Things might not have come to this if father had kept teaching her.
{Kasumi voice was becoming more distraught as regret and the moment was forcing her to make a decision she didn't want to make.}
Kasumi " And that's why Akane must marry Ranma."
Nabiki "What!! Do you want thing like this to happen all the time?"
*What are you thinking Kasumi?*
Kasumi "But don't you see they already do. You told me Akane use that mallet of hers to hit some kids at school when they make her angry.
The same mallet that did this to the dojo. She a danger to everyone around her. And it's to late for us to help her. Please Nabiki you've must help me do this.
What if...What if one day she hits someone to hard and......"
{Kasumi was crying in full now. And she had many reason too.}
Nabiki "Do you think Ranma can give her the control she needs?"
*Why Ranma? I was just thinking I could start to like him. He's not rich but....he is kind of cute.*
Kasumi "Ranma is the only one that could stop her."
* I'm so sorry Akane.*
Nabiki *That's not an answer!*
" Ok, I will help you get Akane engaged to Ranma. But only if you tell me why don't like Ranma."
{What this? Kasumi don't like Ranma? But she likes everybody.}
{It's and alternate universe remember!}
{Oh, right.}
Kasumi "I don't like Ranma.... Because.....Because of what he may do to Akane."
*Ranma if you h........*
{And that's about as far as thought like that go in Kasumi's head.}
{Inside the house Soun and Akane were being told the story of Jhusenkyou. Kasumi and Nabiki entered the room which they were in just as Genma Saotome was finishing the story.}
Genma "I came flying out of the spring rising up to hit Ranma with a powerful strike. But I taught Ranma be prepared for any thing. He twisted in the air and grabbed my paw.
Spun me around and threw me toward the ground. Of course I was undaunted by this, but Ranma stop the match to look for me. Didn't know I was a panda. So....
{ Nabiki, who had already heard the story with Kasumi while Akane and Ranma were have their match. Took this time to ask a simple question. }
Nabiki " If you had hit Ranma what spring would he have fallen into?"
Genma "What?!"
Nabiki "What spring would have Ranma fallen into if you didn't miss?"
Akane " Yes please tell us."
Soun "Come on old friend I would like to know as well."
{Genma Saotome mumble something very quietly.}
Nabiki "What was that?"
Genma "I said Spring of drowned girl."
Akane "Ha, It would of served that pervert right if did!"
{Ranma was just coming in the room, his bath now finished. He caught the end of what Akane said.}
Ranma "What would serve me right?!"
Akane "It would serve you right if you turn into a girl."
Ranma "Why would I want to turn into a silly girl?"
Akane "It better than been a stupid pervert boy!"
Ranma "What did you just call me?"
Genma "Hum! Soun we're all here. I think now would be a good time to get Ranma to choose."
Soun " Oh, right Saotome. Ranma these are my daughters, Kasumi.......
Kasumi "Oh, father he is much to young for me. You know young men bore me."
Soun "Oh, right Nabiki then."
Nabiki "Father I'm not a martial artist. Don't you think a martial artist should be the one to inherit the dojo?"
Soun "Ah, good thinking Nabiki! It's only fitting that Akane should be the one to marry Ranma."
{There was a long moments pause before Akane's answer came.}
Akane "I Hate You!"
{Then she turned an ran from the room. A second later Soun was in tears.
Although she was facing toward her father, Ranma, Kasumi, And Nabiki all knew Akane wasn't speak of him.
If only Ranma could of heard what Nabiki was thinking maybe...maybe he would have felt better.....maybe.}
Nabiki * Saotome Ranma, Sorry about this.*
The end of chapter 1.
Author's Note: {Don't get me wrong, I like Akane. And anyone can see she's Ranma's true love. That's as obvious as Tenchi and Ryoko.
Which holds true in most of their universes. But I've some how got to see Akane as a spoiled brat. Yes that exactly! A spoiled brat who always got her way until Ranma came along.
And that's why she does most of the things she does. Because she can get away with it. Like hitting Ranma and so on. Anyway this story is not an alternate timeline really.
It's some of an alternate universe because I didn't want to get rid of Ranma-chan. {Who is my favorite character!} So I opted for the twin sister setup.
But that doesn't matter till later. JA!}
WM "Tell me what you think. [email protected] mailto:[email protected]