This story is very deep and almost poetic. It's the story of a girl who is forced to become everything she has hated, and it tears her apart inside. I can sort of relate to my character because the relationship she has with her father isn't the best…like mine with my father. This girl is fueled by her hatred and the inner conflicts she faces daily. It's a touching story…and yet you have to remember that she is a warrior, so there will be blood. Not a lot of blood, like brains spilling out, but swords in backs and arrows in the neck…just warning you! Now, weather to use lemon or not, I'd like the readers to tell me if they think I should or not. But I love this story and when I came up with idea I was very pleased with myself! Please let me know what you think! I hope you find this story very deep and meaningful as you read about the battles that this girl has been through. The moral of the story is that love can conquer everything.