I'm not a good romance writer. I fully admit that. Romance is something I simply fail to understand. Nevertheless, I kinda liked the idea of Albus marrying Minerva. How romantic they are outside the context of this particular story is their business, really, so I didn't write it. Didn't want to invade their privacy ;-)
Duj: Well, four against one had apparently been acceptable throughout Severus' school years. The only difference here is that I made it a fist fight instead of hexing each other. The memory Harry saw in Severus' pensieve shows four (or three, but Remus wasn't really helping) against one as well.
Oh and I agree…this would look REALLY creepy as a movie. Even the thought makes me feel incredibly sorry for Alan Rickman