Re-writing the story.

I went on hiatus and just came back.

Now, Read the first chapter, if you never read the original then don't worry you are getting the better read.

Also, I am in need of a beta reader, a reliable beta. No I am not offering money or services as a beta reader… really don't want that, I'm a writer but my English grammar sucks.

So please review, be nice, be mean, be anything you want but please just review. Otherwise I just might not keep the story going