Alright, here's the deal.
After all the lovely reviews, and going back to read the story again myself, I have decided (rather belatedly, I suppose) that the last chapter isn't good enough.
This decision did not take me long to figure out, but I was busy, what are you going to do?
So, I have decided that I will write a new one, or ones. But I need to know if people would really like that.
So, please review to this author's post.
...Although, I think I already know what the answer is...