I've decided to write another chapter for all of you. Thank you all for your lovely reviews she read them. She said they all feel sorry for you for not being able to get with me. I nodded and said they should feel sorry for you for having to deal with me and all my crap. She thought the story was creepy and she just looked over it. I love her to pieces but she doesn't seem to enjoy my depressing style. I love you Sierra!
I own nothing except for the emotions in Dark. If I were to die I would want her there with me.
Anything To see You Smile For Me
Chapter 2: My love, My heart, My Angel
Your cheek is cold to the touch. The warmth and color gone. I had removed the sword after you fell. Blood had gushed from the wound, but you couldn't feel it. I can still feel the linger of your lips against mine. It feels so distant now.
The fighting, the curses, all pointless. All it took was your death to make me realize this. Now I have nothing left. No taqmer, no enemy, and no heart. I realized a little to late that you were my love, my heart, my soul. My angel could you ever forgive me? I never would have guessed that you had told me the truth.
I thought it was a joke, a cruel joke. Then you got mad at me. I thought it was because I didn't fall for it. You know it was hard for me to trust anyone. I still can't believe your gone. Your blood coats my skin. It seems so strange. I finally got rid of you and now I only want you back.
Years of fighting for what, unrequinted love. I thought you hated me so I forced myself to hate you in return. I never would have guessed how far off I really had been, but when you pushed yourself onto the swrod I knew that I had been wrong.
Now your gone. I know you are. Your lips are turning a light pink. your cheeks paleing with each passing second. My angel what am I to do. I've learned to hate you only to have it all fall back on me. I love you, my angel. My broken angel, Krad.
Was I your only true love? Did I come across your mind everyday? Every minute? Did you ever dream of me? Did I ever say I love you in return? I know it's a little late but, "I love you too." Your body is fading from my side. Why are you leaving me?
Do you really love me at all? If you do then you can't leave me. "Don't leave me. You can't leave me alone like this! I love you! I..lo..ve..yo..u!" I punch the ground and scream at the broken sun that hangs overhead.
The trees around me twisting their branches as if to build a cage around me. I'm trapped here in this broken world. I am a piece of broken art. A painting that was ripped in half only to have the other half forever lost. Tears fall down my cheeks as rain starts to fall onto the baren waste land of tainted art.
Even the rain seems broken. This world has no place for love or light, and I've just lost my love, my life, my angel. I wrap my arms around my body. The blood is starting to wash away. Arms wrap around mine. I turn around to see you smiling at me. That can't be. I killed you.
I watch'd your body fade away. I had your blood on my hands, but the rain washed it away. Did any of it really happen? Am I losing my mind? I look down and see blood coming from a wound in my stomache. Blood's blossoming around the blade. Your hand covers mine as we push the blade in further. Your smiling down at me as my vision blurs.
"Now we can be together again." I smile softly as you kiss my cheek. My body's getting weak. I'm afraid to die, but as long as your there beside me I can face anything, because my angel, I'd do anything to see you smile for me.
There it is chapter two. I thought it was a little sweeter but just as dark. I love all my reviwers.
kia: Here's the sequel. I don't think I'll move on though because you can't live without your heart and she has mine completely.
Vera : heh I know it was sad. I hope she does too.
gure'slilinu: It's always sad love. That's how it is meant to be. See you and Sierra soon.
Anendee: Your welcome for the new view on Krad, but looks can be misleading. You never know who's really hurting or who's just an asshole. Thank you for your wonderful review.
monkeylove: Thank you. heh. Don't worry about me killing myself though she's already been over that. I couldn't do it for two reasons one she would be sad and I never want to make her sad. Two if I do then I will never see her beautiful smile again. That is hell in itself for me.
Inu15kags: Thank you and I hope her heart finds mine that way I can show her how love really feels and give her everything she truly deserves.
: yes poor krad.
ALCHEMIST ANGEL 2000: thank you
wolfheart4000 : well I did get one flame. Thank you for your review.
X-Bride: looks at cookie Thank you for your review. I thought of that line when one of my friends said actions speak louder then words. I really started thinking about it last weekend when I realized that I would rather have sierra hit me and beat the crap out of me then have her tell me she hates me. Sorry about the errors I hope this one came out better. Till next time.
Makurayami Ookami: you know I rarely ever lie when it comes to her my dear. You knew it was bound to be a tearjerker.
syanistwolf: yes she is a lucky girl now if only she could see it.
Brit: thank you for your review even though that is an ass of a review. Maybe you could clarify which part of my story was crap. Was it the plot or just the scenery? Was it not sad enough for you or was it just to unrealistic to feel pain that deeply. Please do tell me which part of my story was pure crap.
Well Guys I love all my reviews. Please tell me what you think of the second installment and if you hate it please give me a good reason why not just a two word review that says pure crap! Till next time. Lots of love kit.