Ok, so this will be my first poetic thing I've EVER posted... not that I posted much... ahum

ummm, disclaimer: not mine... well the rhyme is, what it's associated with isn't... well I actually wrote this without the intention to associate it with anything, when I re-read it I was like; "whoa, dude, that's like Gundam SEED Destiny, wicked" (not that high though) ... You can decide for yourself which charecter is chanting this... hihi

anyways moving on:

when you read it, you HAVE GOT TO MIND THE PUNCTUATION OR ELSE IT SUX, A LOT!


Freedom

So you came with your fancy dreams

Your words so true, so free

Your actions; your deeds framed with love

All I wanted, all I needed

There with you

In you...


Yet still, I doubt your intentions

Your ideas so passionate, so strong

Your soldiers; your followers blinded by speach

And speach alone

All I wanted? All I needed?

How can it be so easy

How can you make it so easy

For us?

No, for me


Now I know

Clouded your words were

Half trues, half lies

Never in darkness, never in light

So deceiving, so manipulating

Blinded by lust, I followed

A path, a road set free

To you

By you


Used

Wounded, not broken

My intuition, my own instincts telling me to leave

To run, to hide

But I refuse them

I turn and face you

Your lies and your truth

I will refuse your love

To find my own

For me

For Freedom


Review please? I really wanna know what you guys thought about it...

xMar