Stargate does not belong to me, I'm just borrowing the characters to play with for a while.

Ok, this came to me a while back when my girlfriend made a comment about me crying, just a little angsty thing that won't leave my head. I wrote this about Jack and Sam but I think it can be applied to any couple it conjures in your head,


Oh, I long to see her like that, I don't think I've ever seen her more beautiful than now.

But it's tearing me apart, how can I claim to love this woman (at least in the privacy of my own head) when I find her most beautiful when she cries?

She's looking at me know, never having looked so broken but I can't help my breath catching at how stunning she looks. Her eyes sparkling with unshed tears, she looks so sorrowful. One tear escapes and runs down her cheek, I long to go to her, to stop the tears falling, to comfort her.

But how can I when she is breaking, after being so strong for so long, she is breaking and I can think of nothing but how incredible she looks and how I want to kiss those tears away.


Please review as I'm still a pretty new writer so need feedback.

Thanks f x