Note: This is a poem from Cagalli's point of view. She's talking about Athrun. It's placed right after the second war.

NOTE: I will not post the next chapter of From Princess to Peasant until I get at least three reviews from my first chapter which I edited so that it isn't so rushed.

Disclaimer: (Even though I don't state anything about it in the poem) I don't own Gundam Seed.


A Desperate Cry

If only you could hear my cry,

that escapes my lips into the sky.

I purse my lips in anger, in fear.

Staying silent hoping that it is you I hear.

But nothing is heard, nothing is found.

My gaze is then turned toward the ground.

A lonesome tear runs down my stained cheek.

Why couldn't you have made a promise to keep?

I turn around and leave this place,

knowing that I'll never see your face.

You went to war, you saved a life.

You died for them and me, your wife.


I just wanted to see what you all think of my poem. Please review with your thoughts. And I know I'm not good at poems. If you all like it I will right better longer ones. You could just call this a test drive.

NOTE: I will not post the next chapter of From Princess to Peasant until I get at least three reviews from my first chapter which I edited so that it isn't so rushed.