Disclaimer: Lovelyanime does not own Naruto. If she did, she wouldn't have to give you 20 reasons of what would happen if she did…
Lovelyanime: Hi everyone, I have some bad news. Because TK had some writer's block for the bonus chapter, I kind of…Canceled it. It's been a long time since the update and she hasn't been writing much of the chapter.
TK: I am so sorry to everyone. They will not see what happened when Hinata-san went into labor. PLEASE FORGIVE ME LOYAL READERS OF LA-SAMA!
Lovelyanime: Don't worry, there is always the sequel and you can do the bonuses there. I'm sorry about this everyone. Instead of having the bonus, we will be having the last chapter. Now, after this chapter, my first Naruto story shall finally be finished. The chapter isn't much, it just talks about a couple of things everyone will see in the sequel. Like Tsuzuki-kun! Who is he you ask? Just read and find out!
Chapter 20- A Shikatem Wedding
A month later after Gracia went missing and Naruto and Hinata were reunited at last…
"I don't believe it!"
"The day is finally here!"
"Oh! This is so wonderful!"
"I can't wait 'til it starts!"
"I bet you that Shikamaru will fall asleep during Temari's vows."
"I bet you Temari will beat him up for it."
"Oh I love weddings!"
Everyone that is friends and family of Shikamaru and Temari was all gathered in Konoha for a very special day. It was the day that Shikamaru and Temari were to be married at last. Everyone was excited about it and just could not wait. All the old rookie nine, Tenten, Temari, TK, and Gracia were all in a room as they are trying to get ready. Right now they were all gathered around Gracia at the moment.
"You look so cute Gracia-chan!" Said Ino, just adoring the little girl.
"Don't you think you look pretty?" Asked a soon to be mother, Tenten.
Gracia glared at the ground, angry at what she was wearing. What she had on was a cute little pink kimono with purple petals at the bottom that Temari picked out for her. She looked up at everyone. "I. Hate. Pink." Gracia's gaze shifted to Sakura and glared at her.
Sakura felt a slight shiver running down her spine. She grabbed onto Tenten's arm and tried to hide behind her.
"Don't tell me you're afraid of a four year old?" Tenten whispered to Sakura.
"I'm not, it's just." Sakura looked at Gracia again and saw she was still glaring at her. "I don't think I want to be around when she is angry, you know?" She laughed nervously. "Remember Gaara in the chunnin exams?"
Hinata knelt down next to Gracia. The little girl turned her head and glared at her now. Hinata just smiled and reached out with her hand to her. Gracia wondered what she was doing until it happened. Something she thought would never happen, at least she hoped not. Hinata was- was-…Scratching her behind her ear!!! Gracia went towards the touch, her eyes half lidded. Her leg started to move up and down slightly.
"Hinata, what are you doing?" Ino asked curiously.
Hinata began to giggle. "Hisoka loves it when I do this to him. Plus, when he does something wrong, I do this to make him tell me exactly what he did."
"So it's like their weakness!" Exclaimed TK as her eyes sparkled. "That is so kawaii! May I scratch her behind her ear?!"
Temari shook her head no. "We still need to get ready for my wedding. There's not time for petting Gracia like she's an animal."
"Oh…I did not think of Gracia-chan like that Temari-san."
"I know, but still! We need to get ready dammit!"
Sakura and Ino glanced at each other. "Here comes bridezilla again." They both said at the same time.
"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!?!?!" Temari yelled.
Both the younger girls backed away slowly away, stuttering some apologizes to her. Hinata stopped scratching Gracia and stood up on her feet. "You've been acting strange lately Temari-chan and I don't think it's because of the wedding. Is something wrong?"
Temari sighed. "There is something I found out a few days ago, but I'll tell you guys it later."
Everyone nodded their heads and tried to get everything else ready. Gracia just stood there with a daze look on her face in the middle f the room. Temari and Hinata told the other girls that she would be out of it for a few minutes and will be back to normal in no time. Sakura felt another shiver run down her spine just thinking of Gracia going to start glaring at her again like always.
"HISOKA COME BACK HERE AND PUT YOUR CLOTHES ON!!!!!" Naruto yelled on top of his lungs. He was chasing a naked Hisoka around the room all the while Kiba was laughing his ass off.
"But I don't wonna wear them! Kiba-oji-san said that Gracia-chan will laugh at me!" Yelled Hisoka as he ran on all fours..
Naruto suddenly came to a stop and glared at Kiba. "So this is all your doing!"
"Well I needed to get my pay back somehow." Kiba continued to laugh.
All the guys from the Rookie 9, Kakashi, Gaara, Neji, Lee, Lee's two students, Hisoka, and Tamaki were all in a room, trying to get ready. Naruto tried to get the clothes on Hisoka, but was having some difficulty. Shikamaru had already helped Tamaki dress up and now the young Nara boy was fast asleep in a chair. Shikamaru sat next to his son and was nodding off a few times. Chouji tried to talk loudly to him to keep him awake, but it wasn't working very well. Shino, Sasuke Neji and Gaara were all quiet as they watched Naruto chase Hisoka. Lee had somehow cornered his students in a corner and was telling them how getting married is such a youthful thing. Lets just say the two boys were hugging each other in fear from their sensei. Kakashi was in another corner reading his book.
"Come on Hisoka, I'll buy you some ramen later." Said Naruto as he crept closer to his son.
"Iie!" Hisoka then ran over to Kakashi and hid behind him. "Help me!"
Kakashi sighed and closed his book to put it away. He knelt down to Hisoka and patted his head. "You need to put on the clothes. There's no need to worry, Gracia won't laugh at you She'll even think you're handsome. Isn't that right Gaara?"
Gaara glared at Kakashi, but slowly nodded his head. "…That is right…"
"You see? Even her otou-san says so. Now you have to believe me."
Hisoka thought about it for a moment. "Demo…Kiba-oji-san said-"
"Don't listen to him when it comes to girls. He doesn't know anything about them."
"Oh, is that why he's not getting married like Temari-san and Shikamaru-oji-san?"
Kakashi smiled. "Yep, because they're to afraid that he might hump them on the first date. So they don't want to even go out with him."
"WHAT THE HELL?!" Kiba yelled, steam coming out of his ears. "That is not true!! You don't know what you're talking about!"
Hisoka walked over to Naruto and held out his arms. "Okay otou-san, I'm ready to get dress now."
Naruto gave Kakashi a thank you look which the old sensei just nodded at. Naruto put on Hisoka's clothes and had no trouble at all. This was because Hisoka was watching Kiba yell at Kakashi.
Yep, this would be an interesting wedding day…
(I'm skipping the wedding and going right to the after party. Anyone has a problem with it, oh well. It's too troublesome for me and there is not much going on there except Shikamaru and Temari getting married.)
"Congratulations you two!" Naruto yelled when he saw Shikamaru and Temari walking towards him and their friends, except for Chouji who was off somewhere else.
"Thanks Naruto." Said Shikamaru as he puled his new wife closer to him.
Kiba grinned at Shikamaru. "I was actually surprised you stayed awake. I was sure that you would've closed your eyes and started snoring. Kind of a bummer, I was hopping to see Temari hit you across the head."
"Are you kidding? Temari would do more to me than that. She probably would've killed me. Besides, it's supposed to be one of the best days of my life, I have no reason to sleep through it."
Temari giggled as she traced her finger across her husband's chest "I also warned him if he did it I wouldn't marry him and he could never see Tamaki ever again. That kind of did the trick."
"Hey you guys!" Chouji walked over to his friends, holding onto a woman's hand. "I want you guys to meet someone." Chouji pulled a woman with dark green hair that was in a bun closer to everyone. She looked at all of them with her bright yellow eyes. "This is Dezato (it means desert), my girlfriend."
"Kunoichiwa," she bowed. "It is nice to meet all of you."
"She owns a bakery she just opened almost a year ago in the village. I met her on her grand opening and instantly fell in love with her cooking."
Dezato giggled. "Then when I was going to close that nice he was still there eating. So we talked for a bit while I watched him eat. The next week we had our first date."
"Now get this, we're going to be parents!"
Everyone stared at Chouji and Dezato in disbelief. They were all quiet for a straight two minutes when suddenly Temari, Tenten and Ino squealed and surrounded Dezato and Chouji.
"What a coincidence! So am I!" Tenten said in excitement.
Temari looked over at Shikamaru who nodded his head. "I need to tell you guys something…" Temari took a deep breath. "I'm pregnant too."
Everyone gasped at this. They really didn't think that Shikamaru and Temari would be having another child this soon.
Sakura walked up to Ino and whispered in her ear. "Don't you think it's your turn to confess a little something that we found out at you check up yesterday?"
Ino took a deep breath. "This is so stupid that we're all confessing, but…" Ino glanced at Shino and saw that he was taking a sip from his drink. "I'm pregnant."
Shino spat out the liquid that was in his mouth at the news. His whole face went red the moment he heard Ino.
"Watch it Shino, you almost got me dude." Kiba said to his teammate. He then turned to Ino. "Exactly when did this happen?"
"Who is the father Ino-san?" Asked Lee.
Ino blushed. "Well, um…He's someone in our group and…It was about a month ago when Hinata and I came back."
Kiba laughed. "Really? That sounds like around the same time Shino got laid!…Wait a minute…" Kiba quickly turned back to Shino and pointed at Ino. "IS SHE THE ONE THAT GOT YOU LAID?!?!?!" Everyone in the room went quiet when they heard Kiba yell.
Both Shino and Ino turned deep red at this. Shino in embarrassment and Ino in anger. "You told him?!" Yelled Ino.
"He…He Figured it out himself…"
Absolute quiet. Nothing was heard in the room. Tamaki, Hisoka, Gracia, and TK even went quiet while they were playing with each other. Inoichi, who was sitting at the bar with two of his best friends, stared in wide eyed. He then reached for the sake bottle on the counter and took a big swig. Like his friend would say, this was going to be troublesome…
Soon everyone went back to what they were doing except for Ino and Shino's friends. "Well…" Sasuke began, breaking the silence. "This is a bit of a shock."
Temari was about to say something when she saw something. "Hey you! What do you think you're doing with my wedding cake?!"
A little boy with brown hair that had a bag in one of his hands froze. He was trying to reach for the soon to be cut wedding cake with his free hand. He slowly turned his head around, revealing his purple eyes. The boy looked to be around the same age as Hisoka and Gracia. "I-I was just um…" The bag that he was holding dropped, candy and all sorts of sweets came out onto the floor. "Gah! My sweets!"
"Hey! That's for Tamaki, Gracia and Hisoka! What do you think you're doing with them?!" Temari yelled.
Dezato looked over to see the boy. "Tsuzuki-chan? What are you doing here?"
"I-I was walking by and ano…Oh! Would you look at the time! I have to go home now! Bye-bye!" Tsuzuki ran off, leaving his bag of sweets behind.
Chouji looked at Dezato. "You know him?"
"Hai, he comes into my bakery everyday for some cake." Dezato started to giggle. "He really has such a sweet tooth, I'm surprised his teeth aren't rotten yet."
"So he was trying to steal some of the cake huh?" Temari started to growl. "He's lucky he got away. He doesn't want to know what I had instore for him."
(Tsuzuki will have kind of a big role in the sequel. I just felt like typing him up right now and so people will know about him before the next story)
Meanwhile, TK was taking care of Tamaki, Hisoka and Gracia
"TK-nee-san, I'm thirsty." Hisoka told the older girl.
TK smiled at the young boy. "I can go get you some juice. What kind would you like?"
"Okay then. What about you two? Would you guys like something?"
"I want gwape."
TK nodded her. "Got it!" She turned around and punched her fist into the air. "My new mission, retrieve some juice for Hisoka-kun and the others!" She ran off, leaving the little kids to play by themselves until her return.
TK walked up to the bar, standing next to Shikamaru's dad, because she did not know where else to find juice. She checked a few tables but could only find the snacks. She did not notice that the drinks were actually near where she left Hisoka and the others. The three children were now trying to climb the table with the refreshments without anyone noticing.
"Here you go," The bartender placed the drinks down in front of TK.
"Thank you very much! I hope the flames of youth lives long and joyful within you!"
The bartender just walked away slowly from the weird girl to take care of another customer. TK was about to pick up the drinks when she noticed another drink. She couldn't remember the bartender putting it down in front of her and was curious about it. She picked up the drink and saw it was clear type of liquid.
"Hmm…I am quite thirsty myself and it wouldn't hurt to drink this." She said aloud, getting Shikato's attention. He looked at the cup she was holding and down at the counter and back to her.
"Ano…Excuse me, but-" He stopped when he heard something behind him.
Back to Shikamaru and friends, Lee was watching everyone talking about the soon to be new arrivals. The girls seemed very excited while the guys were afraid of what would happen with four pregnant women…Wait…Sasuke and Sakura were gone(they went somewhere after Sasuke told Sakura about rebuilding his clan) so…Make that five…Anyway, Lee was watching them and he felt something while the background went crazy.
"My sensei senses are tingling!" He turned to his right and saw TK about to take a sip from a cup of sake. If her otou-san found out she was about to drink alcohol, he wouldn't exactly be happy…
"TK-CHAN!" Suddenly, everything went into slow motion. (I love slow motion! XD lol) "Nnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooo!!!" He said in a deep and slow voice as he tried to run towards TK at a very slow rate.
Naruto looked at Lee as if he was crazy. "What is he doing?" He asked Hinata, not speaking slow and deep voice like Lee.
Hinata also watched Lee and said to Naruto, "I'm not really sure."
Lee continued to go towards TK. "TeeeeeeeeeeKaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy!!"
Gracia was already on top of the table and was now holding onto a bottle of soda. She was looking down at Hisoka and Tamaki as they continued to try to get up to her.
"Bakas." She glared at the two boys below and held the soda closer to her.
"Gracia-chan! That's not fair!" Whined Hisoka. "You used your sand!"
Tamaki sighed. "How twoublesome."
"Gracia-chan! You look pretty up there!" Hisoka grinned at her.
Gracia felt the warmth on her cheeks again. "S-So? You're still a baka."
"Don't you think I look handsome?!"
"…Iie." She then scooted around so her back was facing the two boys.
Hisoka's eyes became huge and watery. "Kakashi-ji-san lied to me…Wwwaaaaa!!!!" Hisoka ran off crying. He soon came to a stop though and he grinned. "I found some candy!" He bent down to pick up the sweet. He did not notice Lee coming right towards him in slow motion.
Because Lee was running in a very slow pace, he somehow was unable to stop himself from tripping over Hisoka. So when he tripped, he somehow went flying forward and landed on his head.
"Ano…Excuse me, but-" He stopped what he was saying when he saw Lee behind him on the ground. Even TK turned around to look right before she tasted the drink in her hand. Shikato mumbled 'troublesome' before turning back to TK. "Excuse me."
TK looked at the groom's father instead of going to see if her sensei was OK. "Hai?"
"You have my sake in you hand. Can I have it back?"
"Oh! Gomen na sai! I did not mean to take it. I thought the bartender gave it to me and it was water or something." She handed Shikato back his sake and picked up the juice that was still on the counter. She turned around and gasped. "Hisoka-kun! Why aren't you with Gracia-chan and Tamaki-kun?" She walked passed Lee and went straight to Hisoka. She handed him his juice and they both walked back to Tamaki and Gracia. That was when TK realized about the table of drinks.
"T-TK-chan…" Lee started to sob. His student had ignored him.
Naruto and Hinata walked away from their group of friends while they were talking about baby stuff. They walked around together, with their arms around each other. Hinata snuggled her face into Naruto's chest, so happy that he was alive and was with her.
Naruto was thinking hard about something as he watched Hinata snuggled to him. It seemed like almost all their friends except for Lee and Kiba were having children. He wondered, if it was okay with Hinata, they could have a second child. He missed the last four years of Hisoka's life already and wanted to see what it was like having a baby.
But that is a different story. This one has finally ended with Naruto returning with Sasuke, seeing all his old friends, meeting new people like TK, learning Gaara has a daughter named Gracia, learning about the Tasogare, but most importantly finally meeting his son Hisoka and reunited with his Hinata.
Let this ending be a new beginning for everyone. For this series is far from over.
End Of Story
COMING SOON TO A COMPUTER NEAR YOU!!!!: Part 2 of the Kit series-
The Kit Becomes A Brother
Lovelyanime: IT IS COMPLETE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY FIRST NARUTO STORY IS OVER!!! I would like to thanks everyone! THANK YOU MY READERS! I still remember when I started this story. I was just a week away from my last day of being a freshman at school. And now, the story has ended on week 7 of my junior year. Isn't that amazing? In the beginning I thought everyone would hate this and send me flames because it seemed impossible for Naruto to have a son that is hanyu(that's what two of my friends said, but I ignored them and tried it out) but I was deeply wrong. Sure, I got a few flames, but that really doesn't matter to me. Man, I still can't believe that I have 290 reviews right now. Before this, I was writing Digimon Takumi stories and the highest reviews I got was like 33 in 11 chapters. So this is a HUGE deal to me to have 290( I know it isn't to those who have a lot more but still). Damn, I feel like crying now because this is over. So much typing and work. It feels so strange that It's done with. Well, I guess I have more time to finish my other stories now. Again, thank you to everyone that read, added my to favorites and alerts, and reviewed me. It really means a lot.
Reporter: So LA-san, now that you're finished, what are you going to do next?
Lovelyanime: I'm going to Disney Land!…Okay, not really. Don't have the money and it's to far away. Hmm…I know what I'll really do! I'm going to write a new story called Blind Byakugen! Then when I'm finished with that I will write part 2 of the kit series. Oh, in part 2, there will be a little crossover. If you have noticed the names of Hisoka and Tsuzuki, you'll realize what the cross over will be.
Hisoka: Please review everyone!!
Infinite Freedom- Well, I guess not. But Hinata fainted first and then punched him later on. And Naruto and Hinata didn't say anything about the punch to Jiraiya or Tsunade. At lease that's what I had planned. I hope you enjoyed the last chapter. Please read the sequel when it comes out.
animegirl75- I'm glad to hear it was the best chapter. I worked hard and it was my longest chapter I have EVER written. XD I just couldn't help myself but to do that cliffhanger prank. I had waited so long to do it! Plus if it was a real cliffhanger, I think that group of mob would have tortured me until the next update. lol I'm glad that you liked the kiss. I forgot to mention this, but actually got the idea for it from a picture where a chibi Naruto was licking a chibi Hina-chan's cheek. I love that picture!
Vnvanman- Yeah, sorry it took so long. I hope you enjoyed the chapter, even though it wasn't much. Please read the sequel, it might be a little better.
missyserena214- Well um…I just wanted to do something random, you know? Randomness is fun! lol Also, some of my guy friends and some guy classmates told me they wouldn't want to die a virgin. So, I just assumed that Sasuke would be hoping that his brother wasn't um…Getting some. Lol
Jeikobu Kyoudai-teiru - Yeah, I know it was. But wasn't it funny that Sasuke was ooc? I hope you enjoyed the last chapter. I'll try to get the sequel as soon as I'm done with my next story.
Silver Warrior- I kind of got the idea for when Hisoka licking Gracia from a picture. The picture was of a chibi Naruto kissing a chibi Hina-chan on the cheek. It's such a cute picture! I hope you enjoyed Shino's reaction to Ino being pregnant. Even though it wasn't much. Well, Sasuke does hate Itachi very much I actually made Tamaki and the old TK more like myself in this story. I guess I do feel like I am rotting away sometimes. But I put that kind of feeling into my Zodiac U story.
jjayno1- I'm glad you think it's funny. Sorry it took so long to get the two back together. If you want more of Hisoka and humer, wait until the sequel comes out! I promise you that it will be as funny as this one.
DarkxPrince- Wow…That was a very nice girl yet manly squeal! Lol If you didn't see my notes after the story was over, then yes. Naruto and Hina-chan will mate again! And it's going to be a surprise if it's a girl or a boy and there will be a surprise.
Darkslilangel- Yeah, I'm glad that you liked Gaara go crazy. He is very protective of her and he is a kazekage which can do almost anything he wants. Yeah, Tenten is pregnant, along with Temari, Chouji's girlfriend, Ino and Sakura soon will be. And if you haven't noticedmy AN, Hina-chan will be too! ) Everyone is having babies!! lol Are you sure you want to thank me, after all, I am kind of the reason why they haven't seen each other in years. -.- I hope you enjoyed the last chapter!
SSJ2 PikaFlash- I'm glad you liked the cliffhanger trick. I couldn't help myself but to do it! Sorry I don't have a bonus chapter. I'll try to make one for the sequel. I'll read you're fics when ever I have a writer's block. Although I don't want it to seem that I'm taking your ideas.(I feel bad that I put something that's just like from another story) I hope you enjoyed the last chapter.
DarthValgaav- You don't have to worry about me, I have a backup plan in case he doesn't stop. (grins evily) Yes, I think it will do quite well…Well, I'm sure Gaara would have done that. But he was in such a huge panic and wasn't thinking right. So the only thing he could think of was war. Killing many people instead just killing one sounded like a lot of fun to Gaara. lol
PaulRap Raptor- Sasuke will most likely find him in chapter 9 or so in the sequel. I have been thinking about the other Akatsuki having kids. I was thinking about having Deidara have a kid, but I think Kiss-kun and Kama-kun will do. I'll try to do a good job for the sequel. Please look for that when it comes out. I'm sure you'll enjoy it.
Chronostorm- Umm…S-Sasuke was uh…hiding. Yeah, that's it! He was hiding in the corner and making out with Sakura!(awkward moment)…Okay, okay. I forgot he was in the room. That's why Hina-chan didn't see him. No one has noticed it so I guess it was okay. I hope you enjoyed the last chapter and look forward to the sequel. I'll try to make it much better than this one.
Chidori vs Rasengan- R-really no? I'm glad that I didn't really have the cliffhanger.(note to self, be careful with Chidori-kun and cliffhangers.) I'm sorry I didn't have the bonus chapter. TK-chan kept havng writer's block. TT.TT I was looking forward to it but it just couldn't be typed up. Oh well, there's always the sequel. I guess I can be a guest author. Um, right now my e-mail isn't working on my computer so I need to go on my aunts's(who lives like an hour away now) to talk to you again. I really want to watch that anime you showed me again. TT.TT My computer is to slow to upload it…
Lyra the Sorceress of Scholars- I'm happy that you liked the reuniun.(even though the band running by kind of ruined it for Naruto and Hinata-.- lol) Gracia is awesome! You know, a lot of people like her, even more than Hisoka! That sure has been a shock to me. I'll try to have more Hyuugas fainting, but I don't think I can promise anything.
Weasel Debater- Umm…I thought it would be funny and random. (randomness is awseome!!) Plus he was hoping Itachi wouldn't have the pleasure to be with a woman and…stuff. To me, it seems a lot of guys don't want to die a virgin so it just came to me to put that in there. I know it was weird but oh well.
taintedlegacy- I'm glad that you liked the reunion. There will be a lot more going on in the sequel like the new kid Tsuzuki-kun. I hope the last chapter was good and you'll look for the sequel to this when it comes out.
HinaNaruFan987- Sorry it took me so long to update. Writer's block really sucks, you know? Hina-chan punching Naruto was really funny, huh? I don't think Tsuande would get her money back since Hina-chan fainted first. So I think Jiraiya would keep the money I guess. I don't know, I didn't really think about it when Hina-chan punched Naruto.
Dragon Man 180- That's cool that you liked the reuniun. If you haven't seen the AN above then yeah, Hisoka will be getting a new little sibling in the sequel. I'm so happy everyone enjoyed the kitsune kiss. I got it off a picture of a chibi Naruto licking a chibi Hina-chan's cheek. It's so cute!
Shimera Riku- No problem, I actually had fun typing Naruto getting punched. lol I hope you'll read the sequel and see a pregnant Hina-chan hit Naruto. (laughes evily) He will pay for pretending to be dead. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the last chapter.
Darkhope- Yeah, but it's never to late talk about it for when the time comes. Besides, he won't want to mate until he's like 15. They need to get ready when the time comes right?…Except for Jiraiya. No, he might encourage little Hisoka during mating season. lol Um, I never thought of having Hisoka turning into human. A full demon maybe, but not human. I'll have to think about it. Sorry it took so long to update the last chapter. I hope you enjoyed it.
draw.62121- I-I-I finished it, see? So there's no need to kill me! Oh, you were just kidding. (sighs) Well that sure is a relief! lol I know, I did my best to make them look cute together. But sorry to say, I also agree with you. NARUHINA IS MUCH CUTER!!
Sennyu Megami- Hope you didn't laugh to hard that you got the hiccups,(that happens to me all the time. TT.TT Even while I'm in class at school) Yep, they sure aren't anymore, are they? Guess we'll be seeing more Uchihas on the way.
Lightning Bob- Well, wouldn't Jiraiya still when because Hinata fainted before hitting Naruto? Sorry, there's no bonus chapter. Stupid writer's block was in the way. So instead, it's the last chapter. It might not be that good, but I hope you still enjoyed it. Please look out for the sequel when I post it.
Life's-Black-Rose-Petal-Gilly- Nope, it's his son. I guess I fooled a lot of people with that. lol You would be surprised at who would do it with Kisame. I sure was when I saw a bunch of fan clubs and stuff while trying to look for a name for Kiss-kun. Well, you'll see Kama-kun and Kiss-kun again in the sequel. So I hope you'll look forward to that.
The Anime Wolf- Of course! Hina-chan is Hina-chan and it would be a bit of a shock if you saw someone that you thought was dead, right? Plus it's funny to torture Naruto like that. Especially when she punched him in the face! XD Best part of the chapter, don't you think? lol I just thought it was troublesome for someone to tell Hina-chan that Naruto was alive.
Epicweaver- I only had the flashbacks so Naruto could see what he missed over the past 4 years. Also, because I could have a lot of humor in the story. The story was going to be about naruhina, but as I continued to write the story…Well, as you can tell it didn't really go the way I had planned. I'm really sorry about that. I changed the genre from romance/general to humor/general. I'll try to make the sequel better than this one. It'll have more naruhina than in this story, or least I'll try to have more. If I don't, I'm very sorry again.
Aracade- O.o Wh-why is there lightening in the background? It's kind of scaring me a bit.(hides behind chair) I-I'll try to hurry with my next story so can make the sequel.
Marlin Man- Fluffy is a good thing, right? Everyone loves the fluffiness! I know I have bad grammar and spelling. I've been trying very hard to get better, but it's kind of hard for me. I promise I'll try to do a lot better in the sequel.
Ero-sennin-clone - T.T I. Hate. You. (and don't you say that I don't!…Okay, I don't. Happy?) How could you tell Naruto my weakness!! Just because it was fun?! TT.TT That's so mean, just like when you try to stab me with a marker! I trusted you ESC-kun. TT.TT I know random is fun, but still, coming from you it can be scary sometimes….I'm not crazy!…I'm not…I'll talk to you later…
Ikasury- Ika-senpai!! TT.TT I'm so sorry I haven't talked to you in a while. My computer won't let me on my e-mail. I promise, as soon as I get it fixed or go on my aunt's computer, I'll e-mail you. I feel so bad for not responding to your e-mail TT.TT I understand that you didn't review the last chapter. And yay for the shack of doom! Lets have Naruto stay in there for a month! Yeah, I'm sure he'd love it! lol And also hooray for Shino getting laid! And becoming a soon to be father!. (rubs head) Sorry, I forgot about the katana.(takes out katana and scary music for a nearby radio turns on) Wow, what a coincidence with that music coming on, huh? lol Wait, I don't want to go to boot camp…Wait…No! Not the poking! (sits next to Gai and rocks back and forth) I'm scared of the pokes. TT.TT I'm really sorry about the -kun. I knew I should've gone with my instinct that you were a girl. Very stupid of me for calling you -kun. Thank you for the list of honorifics. I'll use them o help me from now on. Okay Ika-senpai, I'm going to write a new story Blind Byakugen and then write the kit's sequel.
kydizzle- Glad you liked the punch. It was awesome typing Naruto getting hit! I should do it again in the sequel! Sorry it took so long to update. I'll try to do better for the sequel. I hope you'll be able to read it when it comes out.
bobbetter- Yes I am!…Wait…You were talking about the story?…I-I s-see how it is…W-will you hold on a second please…(goes to a corner and cries. Comes back a few minutes later) Okay (sniff) I'm good. lol Anyway, I'm really it took like two months to update. At least you don't have to wait for any more chapter since this was the last one. Now you just have to wait for the sequel!…Hold on…That might not be good since it'll take a long time to post…Well, I hope you enjoyed the chapter!
Yomoji-kun - I'm happy you loved the story, but sadly there isn't anymore chapters. This is the last one. Not to worry though! I am writing a sequel for it! Right as soon I'm done typing another story. Maybe you'll love the sequel just like you enjoyed this story. Um…I don't know if I have any writing tips. I mean, have you seen my spelling and grammar? TT.TT I can be really bad at it. But how about this! I usually look at other people's writing(in fanfic or books) and see how they do it. Sorry, that's all I really have. TT.TT I'm really not the one to ask for tips. I'm sorry…
crazed5cookie- TT.TT I know I can't spell sometimes. I try my best but it still comes out like that. T.T I think it's my computer. I don't know how, I just know it is its fault…Okay, I just want something to blame it on. I'm glad you still liked the story even with my mistakes. Hope you'll like my next stories coming out soon.
Uzumaki Dante- Sorry for the late update. I'll try to hurry up with the updates when I post the sequel.
Akizakura202- Is it predictable? I guess I'll have to try harder to make surprises in the sequel. I'll also try to make it much funnier! But there will be some drama moments in it, you know? This will be the last update, so I hope you enjoyed the chapter. Ooh! I wonna see the chibi-Itachi-weasel! Wait…Don't let it attack me! Nooo!(runs away. Comes back a few minutes later) Is he gone? Okay, good. That's cool that Gracia-chan is your favorite. I actually just took Gaara's past, his way with people and other stuff and changed it a little for Gracia-chan. But I guess I do put in some darkness I have into her(I can do a lot better with drama like for Gracia-chan than cheery things like for Hisoka-kun) I don't mind people's rambling so you can do it as much as you like. Although I feel like I ramble on too much, so just tell me if you don't want me to talk to much.
hinata-naruto-neji-HNN - Glad that you thought it was funny. It was cute, wasn't it? Gracia-chan is really a kawaii hanyu!(snuggles chibi Gracia doll) She's so awesome! Kyuubi: How dare you laugh at me! You will pay- LA: Bad Kyuu-kun! (hits Kyuubi on head) Don't be mean to my reviewers! Kyuubi: She was snickering at me saying kawaii! LA: I don't care! (sigh) Anyway, I hope you'll be able to review the sequel!
RagingDragon004- Okay RD-kun…You're my last review for the story. So here it goes. (sigh) T.T You haven't reviewed all the chapters. You only started reviewing in chapter 11. I just checked it and didn't see any of your reviews before it. Err…I usually respond to everyone's reviews like at midnight so I was very tired. Sorry about that. Look, I spell it right this time! See? Sorry it took so long. I was going to update on Saturday but…O.o M-my friend and o-over and…M-made me watch hours of Azu Manga Daiho. It was 3 o'clock in the morning when their mom came to pick them up!…(walks over to corner and walks back and forth) S-so much anime…Run grampa. Get out of the street… Naruto: Looks like she's gone crazy. Awesome! Now we can do whatever we want! We're free! Come on Hina-chan!(goes off into the sunset with Hinata) LA: Wha?(snaps out of it) Where do you think you're goin?! (sigh) Oh well. I can't wait to hear your review RD-kun. Hope it doesn't get cut off again like last time.