Hi there! I got really bored in art class today so I came up with this random one shot...it's written all in dialogue so i hope you don't mind I decided to post it just for the sake of seeing people's reaction to my one shot so i hope you enjoy it..i enjoyed writing it.

Now for the lack of light in In theDark...

Underlined words: Time/ action

Bold words: Pain and clicks

In The Dark

"Athrun when are the lights coming back on?"

"I don't know Cagalli, it's a blackout, so I don't know?"


"Yes Cagalli. Why aren't the lights working?"

"Because something's wrong with the electricity."

"Well what are we supposed to do?"
"Sit here and wait Cagalli."

"Do we have to?"

"Yes Cagalli. We wouldn't want to bump into anything if we got up and started moving around in the dark."


"Groan. Yes Cagalli."

"I'm bored."

"I know you are, but if we wait a bit longer I'm sure the lights will go on soon."

5 seconds later



"The lights aren't on."

"I know the lights aren't on."

"I'm bored"



"Could you just wait quietly for them to come back on."

"Ok Athrun…"

10 seconds later


"YES Cagalli."

"Do you love me?"

"What kind of question is that?"

"Do. You. Love. Me."

"I heard you the first time."


"Is this a trick question?"

Athrun meets Cagalli's fist



"Ok, ok. I l…"


"Yay the lights are back on!"


"Hey don't look at me like that."

"I thought you wanted to know if I loved you or not?"


"Meeh! Meeh! Is that what you think of our relationship!"

"I don't know you're the coordinator."


"It's physically proven that you are faster and smarter then naturals aka me. So you tell me about the relationship."

"So what if we're better?"

"Well isn't that why the wars happened because you wanted to get rid of the dumber species."



"I love you as a natural."




"Fine don't tell me!"

"Hey where are you going?"

"I heard Meyrin needs a boyfriend."



BANG Athrun meets fist round two


"You know I was only joking right?"


"Wow you guys really are the dumber species."

"What's that supposed to mean!"

"Nothing at all."

"I think you were insinuating something!"

"Nope nothing."


"Yes Cagalli?"

"I love you too, even if you are a dumb coordinator." Kissing Athrun on the cheek she started to run to the door when…


"God damn it what's wrong with these lights!"

Well there's my one shot...hopefully I'll update A Buisnesslike Fall soon... PLEASE REVIEW! ALL COMMENTS ARE EXCEPTED! I know it's very unlike me to write something so short and so badly so all comments (flames, constructive critism etc areaccepted)but meeh i just wanted to post it.

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