Well, it is over, but I am just putting this here to let everyone who has an alert of favorite that Part III is up!!!! That was quick, huh? Anyways, this is just to let you know the first chapter of Part III is up, just follow the links to Part III
So, here I will at least put the review responses, so here they are!!
All: Thank you so much for helping me write this story, To Shaggy and everyone else, let me explain a little behind my motivation, since Shaggytwin asked, I might as well let everyone know what is going on in my mind, so here it goes.
The reason that it started this story so Angst-y was because I started writing when I was mad, sort of like an outlet, but then I caught on and enjoyed writing this, not just as an outlet for anger, but as a test of my creativity, and an outlet for my ideas. Then when I found that people were actually reading, I took it almost as a challenge to make the story better, because I want to deliver the best that I can. You are taking time out of your busy lives to read this, so I am taking time to make this as good as possible. I am just glad that you liked it.
Shiva: Thanks for the compliments; I am glad that you liked it. I hope that you like Part III just as much. Go take a look at Part III, and hopefully I can get another chapter up soon!
Ryota: Better get off the pencil before you get lead poisoning!!! AHH!!! I'll try to make some of the others as real as I tried to make Gohan, and I hope that I can do that well too! Come to Part III, and I hope that you like it!
ClassicBeauty: Part III is up, come take a look at it, I hope that you like it as much as you liked Part II!!
Shaggytwin: Originally, it was headed to some more Gohan/Gwen than it had, but something told me that this seemed like the way to help me out further down the line, you will see what I mean if you continue on to Part III. Anyways, thanks for the compliments and I hope you enjoy Part III