first i want to say is if you don't like this story. please don't leave flames ok.
lastly...HOW IS MAI-LIN A MARY-SUE? SHE'S SIX YEARS OLD FOR CRYING OUT LOUD THERS NO ROMANCE IN THIS STORY!.
Chapter 3: earth Vs swords
Mai-lin kept her stance,she wasn't going to let her gaurd down. the young man braced him self with his hook swords. Mai-lin summoned a rock towrds him. The boy slashed his sword at the rock slicing the rock in hafe, he didn't see the other rock coming tords him. Mai-lin droped the rock in front of his face, Jet watched the rock shot right back up, hitting him in the face!. He reacted to the blow, he did see a larger peice of earth smacked him in the stomach, Mai-lin stood there waiting for the boy to stike.
" Well, are you going to strike me or what?" she asked. The boy recovered from the blow ran torwds her, he striked but! Mai-lin blocked the swords with a slanted piece of the earth. the young man withdrawed his swords concluding the duel into a draw
" Impressing, tell me who are you?" he asked. Mai-lin didn't say a word, she was wondering why he stoped fighting her.
"My name is Mai-lin, who are you?" she asked.
" I'm Jet, leader of the freedom fighters" he said " tell me, why are you out here all alone?"
" my parents and my home village was torned down by...by...by the fire nation" she said with a tear rolling down her eye.
" hey, hey don't cry. I lost my home and parents to the firenation as well, the freedom fighters are all about use orphants that lost there parents to the fire nation, As freedom fighters we stick together and do what ever we kids can to mess with those filthy cold harted firebenders" Jet told her.
Mai-lin cheered up a little bit what Jet said sounded really cool.
all that you been waiting for...chapter 3 is up enjoy.