Seventh attempt to get this posted correctly, or is it eighth... Fanfiction hates me. Please dear Kami-sama let this work!
Anyway this is a short story in poem format.
Important: All of the dialogue is in Japanese because I wrote it that way and it doesn't sound as good in translation. I tried five times to put translations on the right but like I said, fanfiction hates me. I'll just post this both ways
So here is
Orochimaru wa yappari shinda (or Orochimaru is finally dead)
Yappari Orochimaru wa shinda!"
face hidden by his
snow white hair,
toward the writhing body
that was Orochimaru
and collapsed to his knees.
gathered the broken body into his arms.
As it spasmed
he held Orochimaru tight to himself.
shhhhhh he hushed. "daijoubu
da Oro." He whispered into the raven locks,
"Jiraiya! Nandattebayo?" Natuto cried.
"Naruto wa Sasuke-kun mou
anraku o suru yo."
Naruto looked on the two
long separated friends.
"un" he nodded.
"Iku" Tsunade turned
and the others followed.
"Jiraiya!" Orochimaru cried,
clinging to him,
nails digging into the red fabric
which grew redder with the blood it drew.
"Jiraiya, itai! Motto itai da!"
on Orochimarus face.
"Hai," Jiraiya choked,
"Wakatta." He tried to say
more but couldn't.
Orochimaru smiled weakly.
"shikata ga nai ne?"
"O- Oro." Jiraiya sobbed. "gomen. gomene."
"iie." Orochimaru shuddered
and struggled to go on.
"daijoubu da. Nnh, Jiraiya…"
"Nani?" He whispered.
"Ai shiteru." Orochimaru said...
quietly, almost all
his strength gone.
laughed, half sobbed.
"Ai shiteru." He said.
And kissed Orochimaru gently
as he slipped from life.
I'm really proud, I only had to look up the word anraku for comfort! That being said I don't know much about when, where, and how to use the words so PLEASE correct me if I am wrong somewhere!
My blood and tears and soul and especially my mind went into not just writing this but posting it too!!
Please review and show me that my efforts are worth it!!
I live off reviews, please help me live.