This story has gone by so fast. It's sad to see it end, but it would just be dragged out if I wrote any more. I would like to personally thank all my reviews, you guys rock. I never set a limitation for how many reviews, and yet I still reached 200 reviews anyway (well after this chapter I will...). I would like to dedicate this entire story to Save Danny69. Who actually has a horse named Shadow….which died unfortunately…
Thanks to all 25 people who put Riding Shadow on their favorite list.
4. Black January
6. I Laugh at ur Pain
11. Save Danny69
12. Siberian Husky
13. Sleep Warrior
14. Stare up at the starry sky
17. flarey phoenix
Then I would like to thank from the bottom of my heart all 37 of you who put Riding Shadow on their Author Alert list. You have no idea how great an honor it is for me.
Evil Long Penname Having Individual End
Invader Miley Phantom
Xo Maddi oX
37 author alert is the most any story has every gotten, and it is already half the size of most of my stories. I hope to get even more with Total Eclipse of the Heart. Now it's for the part that you all are waiting for. I'll post the preview for TEH again, and then put a little segments from the chapter 1. It won't be posted till the second week in June, but that's ok right? I added stuff to it.
Total Eclipse of the Heart:
An evil plan unfolds...
The dark figure stood over the sleeping Danny. Danny tossed and turned as the blue whisp fell out of his mouth. It was probably the box ghost.
"Now this won't hurt at all." He emptied the remains of the needle into Danny's body.
New emotions grow...
"I think I'm in love." Danny's eyes connected with Tuckers as the lights flashed all around them, the music drowning his words almost to the point of nonexistence.
"What?" Tucker asked.
"I think I love Sam..."
His powers grow stronger...
"Isn't this cool, I have another power."
"This is great." Tucker exclaimed.
"Yeah, great." Sam whirled around in the chair so she wasn't facing them. Danny overlooked Tucker, and stared at Sam. Why wasn't she happy about this?
He's loosing touch with his friends...
Danny's eyes narrowed at Sam.
"You let the ghost get away!" His hand grabbed her arm shaking it wildly. She winced with the pain; his nails ripping into her flesh.
"Danny, you're hurting me."
"I'll find the ghost myself." He pushed her to the ground and flew off. Tucker ran over to help her. His face grew pale when he saw blood slowly trickling down her arm.
How long will it take before...
"I don't know you anymore." Danny's eyebrows knitted together. What was she talking about; he was the same old Danny that she knew ever since second grade.
"Sam." He took a step forward, and she took a step back.
"Stay away from her." Tucker growled as he stood in front of her.
He looses control of himself...
The body lay at his feet, blood staining his hands.
"Danny." Sam whispered in disbelief. Her head started to fog up with confusion. Danny was in front of her with blood covering his hands.
"Sam." Danny reached out to touch her cheek, but she pulled away.
"You hurt Tucker, you hurt me..."
"Kill her now." Vlad ordered. An ecto-blast formed in Danny's hand.
"Danny, you can fight it."
"Silence." Vlad screamed. Ocean met violet.
"It's Vlad or your friend Danny." She screamed in pain when a blast that was fire from Vlad hit her.
"What are you waiting for?" Vlad questioned.
"I'm sorry Sam..."
I been trying to decided what part of the chapter to stick in here. I went with some of the fluff... just because the story doesn't haven't much of it.
"So her granda died?!"
"Not so loud, I don't want to have the whole school to know."
"No wonder she's depressed."
"I don't know what I'm going to do Tuck."
"About what?" Danny stopped at the sight of John talking to Sam. He felt his eyes fo green when Sam laughted.
"Uh Danny, your eyes." Tucker hissed. Danny struggled, but managed to get them back to normal.
"You better ask her."
"Ask her what?"
"The whole school is waiting for you to ask her." Sam's eyes locked with his causing him to pull his eyes away.
"But what if she says no."
"If I know her like I think I do, you won't have anything to worry about."
"Hey guys." Sam inturrupted their conversation.
"So what did John want?" Sam's cheeks filled with a pinkish color.
"He asked me to the dance."
"Are you going with him?" Danny couldn't stay around for the answer,
"I got to go." He pushed by them and ran out the school.
"What's his problem?"
"Why don't you go ask him yourself?"
"Danny wait!" She finally caught up with him at the park which he often cut through to get home. Danny however didn't stop."
"Danny, what's wrong?"
"Nothing, why don't you hang out with your new boyfriend?" Sam rolled her eyes.
"Is that what this is about?"
"Yes, you don't know John- You haven't heard the way he talks about girls in the locker room."-
"Which is why I turned him down. John is... not my type. I don't know him, and I've heard about him fro other girls." Danny saw his chance and took the plunge.
"So what exactly is your type?"
Hehe. Well there you have it. Take a look at my forum and post your comments on it please. Also review so this can reach 200! It was a pleasure writing this story.