I know I said I wouldn't write more until I got more reviews but, Gah! I finally found the Atlantis section. This is only an introduction, so review my other work and I'll begin! I know it sounds cruel, but think about it from my point of view. I get low self esteem when no one says anything. Do you people want me to go into a mental breakdown?
Yeah, that was a little over the top (just a little bit) but I mean it. It's rude not to review.
Screw it, I'll give you a little taste (little bit)
Milo Thatch waited nervously in the other room. He had been there for twelve long hours. Suddenly, he heard a sharp cry. He burst into the room and saw his beloved Kida covered in blood and holding a baby. He sighed with relief, knowing that the long ordeal was over. He walked over to Kida cautiously who was now wrapping the little thing up in linen. He put his hand on her shoulder and she looked up at him.
"Is it a boy or a?" he found himself unable to speak
"A girl?" finished Kida. "Yes, she is."
"May I?" he asked hesitantly holding his hands out for the girl.
"Of course." she laughed as he awkwardly tried to hold her. "Like this." she said putting his hand under her bottom and one on her back
"She's beautiful, Kida. What should we name her?"
"Kirasuma, after my grandmother." she said, touching her finger to the girl's small lip.
"I'll just botch it. Kira, to me." the girl stirred, as if she accepted the name. She then slept on, one of the few moments of peace her parents got in these first months.