A Snake Akito

Back and forth, back and forth she swayed

long and thin as a whip

lovely, white skin, as white as the finest porcelain

beautiful jewels swim and make patterns and shapes before my eyes

a soft low hissing, like a mother crooning a song

deep, black eyes

black as pitch I thought

now I see that they are moist jewels swimming in never ending darkness

hypnotized, mesmerized,

until,

too late

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Now, I wrote this for school about a SNAKE (points to top title) but it just made me think of AKITO (points to bottom title)! I know that's sad but… this is from Shigure's point of view!!!!!!! Then it makes sense right? And I changed a couple things to make it fit better. like I replaced "scales" wth "skin". tell me if I shouldn't have. And if it doesn't… review and tell me and I'll explain, or take it down if you prefer. Just review pretty, pretty please!!!