Disclaimer: I do not own the Phantom of the Opera.
This is a concrete poem I wrote for a poetry notebook in Accelerated English (written in the shape of a ring in the notebook), the theme of which was The Phantom of the Opera. All poems were from Erik's point of view. Please enjoy. Reviews are appreciated.
such a hateful, spiteful reminder
of love lost
given the loser
by the victor's
beautiful, living trophy.
Never did I wish
for such a cold, unfeeling "gift"
to sneer at me
for the rest
of my pitiful existence.