Ok it looks as though you guys will get your wish! I'm going to make a sequel… believe that it will be called Dawn (nice guess ILuvFangs13) I already know what it will be about I just have to write it. I want to thank everyone who has helped me and who has reviewed my story:
Ms. Masen Cullen
Jayde3 (Love the name btw)
ILuvFangs13 (Thanks for everything)
A special thanks to all those who put my story on as one of their favorites. I love you guys
Mrs. eddie cullen
And also thank you for everyone who put my story on alert!
Ok well I figured since I already know a line from the new story I figured that I would give you it! However, I'm not going to give you anything but the context, in other words, your going to have to wait to find out how this line came to be and what happens afterward! (Don't hate Jay though you'll see what happens)
She wasn't looking at us and I couldn't see her eyes. In fact she was looking everywhere but at us. "Jay?" I called her name but she didn't look up or even acknowledge that I had called her.
Troy placed his index finger under her chin and lifted her head to look at us but her eyes were snapped shut as tight as they would go. Why wouldn't she look at us? Did she hate us? That couldn't be the case otherwise she wouldn't have tired to help us!
Troy slapped her across the face hard, moving her face all the way to the left. Her eyes flew open and she glared at him. Then carefully and slowly her gaze turned to look at us standing there in front of her. Her eyes were full of sadness, more sad then they had been when we first met. Her face was long and drawn out, sober and sad. But the thing that caught my attention the most wasn't the sad, depressed, given up face that she had plastered on her face. What caught my attention most was the color of her eyes.
They were a deep burgundy shinny red!
Ok there you go! Now before you jump to conclusions I'd think about this hard. Well…I'd better get writing! Tell me what you guys think of those couple of paragraphs! (But don't hate it simply b/c of what happens you'll understand later.)