Hey guys, I've been re-reading the story (as the way it is so far) and I've come to realize that there are a lot of typographical errors with the spelling, grammar, and citations in the first few chapters. That, and the story's rushed yet draggy at the same time. The rest of the fic's still under smooth progress, but I think I've overdone the other chapters a bit, taking inspiration from other mangas and real-life events that had happened. The story's draft is actually already up to sixty something chapters long, and they're mostly about random things, so there's a possibility of making this a trilogy. Just a possibility. Nothing official.
Due to certain peer pressure, I'll first be doing some reconstruction on the first few chapters to make them more understandable (hopefully), and then, I'll be doing my best to make Hikaru and Haruhi's love story something you all will enjoy reading about. Yes, their love story happens before Kai and Kaoru's. :3 Friendship leads to every kind of love, after all.
Also, I'd love to hear from you! If you've got any suggestions or requests (like maybe, you were inspired by other stories and thought of a scene that can be re-written for this fic, that happened a lot while I was still drafting the other chapters down.), or maybe, you've got some pointers, tips or advice for an amateur writer like me (really, I am. x3), I'm all open. Constructive criticism too.
Thank you so much to all those who've read, reviewed, and gave me so much support despite my lack of efficiency. ^_^;; I'll try to update as soon as possible. Take Care! :D