Ya like the update time? Am i great or what?
I wrote a oneshot then got like 4 reviews for it. :( :( :( :(
to my amazing and great reviewers...pretty good number of you. obviously the fast updating did the trick, i should try it more often :P
Anyway...i got 2 more reviews for chapter 9, and then a bunch for chapter 10.
The two that i got for chapter 9 after i posted chapter 10...
Jeremy Shane- Well thank you. :)
LukeNLorelai637- woohoo updating. i rock.
And now the 13 for chapter 10!
many of my reviewers that used to review every chapter have stopped reviewing..and there for reading. i got 219 hits...and 13 reviews... review people! please! i'm begging you.
gets on hands and knees PLEASE REVIEW
widgetgirl- I'm glad that you like it...here comes more! haha you get a new chapter the day after you read the story...
LukelovesLorelai- yah. Chris was strangled 13 times. :) :D
DarkPascual- Aww thanks. I try not to make it short...but after a while I think "how much longer can i stay on this chapter" then i start writing a new one. What is someone gonna pull on chris? i hate him too...i didn't really care for logan, and my ex-boyfriend's ex-girlfriend was my best friend. currently single (and lovin it)...hence the ex-boyfriend. :) :) :) :D
gilmorefanforever- Chris deserves to die. and it gets me reviews.
LukeNLorelai637- updating updating updating!
javajunkie mi- claps with javajunkie mi. throws house at chris claps again
Luke-Lorelai Cordelia-Angel- Nah. but we can never really kill him off because, really, then what would we do for fun? Kill a chair? (and he gets me reviews!) a girl that i talk to online's name is Ariela...i've used that name in two of my stories. it's pronounced like A-Ree ela. not airyela. that's why i think it's so pretty.
Lena Kim- Rory will come into play eventually. I don't think I'm ever going to be able to end this, or any of my other stories.
Jeremy shane- Hmm..lawn mower...meteor...car...
lukeandlorelaidanes- liz will have jess...everything will fall into place eventually. i finally know where i'm going..that's why i stopped the polls. i like the amount of reviews that i'm getting...i hope to hit 200 by chapter 17 at least.
Samvalasam- yay a new reviewer. well along with all the other new reviewers. you just popped out to me as a new reviewer first because you put :D sam at the bottom of your review. and yes, die chris, die.
4everJavaJunkie- points and laughs loudly at blushing what does gerad mean? awww gotta love kids.
TweetyBirdGirl- cool. step by step strangling chris.
you guys are the life of my story! lalalala
anywayyyeee...i have to go babysit...which means that i will finish writing the chapter tonight. if i don't get to it...let me tell you that i had full intentions of writing and updating this chapter on um..whtat's today? oh yeah. September 13, 2007. but i have to get changed. :D :D :D
gahh. it is now a day after i wrote that. it's September 14th 2007 now. :P
without further ado, I give you chapter um...i forget. again...11? oh well if it's not 11 i'm making it 11
Chapter 11: You're...
"She really reminds me of Mom." Liz came out of the kitchen after hearing and seeing the last exchange between Luke and Lorelai.
"Yeah. She does." Luke said. They both walked upstairs and went their separate ways at the top of the stairs.
"Night big brother."
Luke and Lorelai continued dating for the next two months. William grew fond of Lorelai, and she was over there for dinner at least twice a week, and Luke was at her house a lot too. Everything was going great, and they had everything they could ever want.
"Hey Liz." Lorelai walked into Luke's house on a Saturday morning. She didn't usually knock, so she walked in to see Liz sitting on the couch. She looked more closely and could tell that Liz was upset. "Liz? Is something wrong?"
"Do you want to talk about it?"
"If I tell you you'll tell Luke and Dad."
"Not if you ask me not to."
"Yes. Now what's wrong? Wait..do you want to talk somewhere else? Luke and William could hear us."
"They actually left a few minutes ago. Pat couldn't come to work so Luke went to the diner and my Dad went with him."
"Okay, then we'll talk here. What's wrong?" Lorelai sat down next to Liz. Liz looked at Lorelai, and her lip began to quiver. Tears started falling out of her eyes. Lorelai hugged her until she calmed down. "Liz?" She asked tentatively.
"I...well you know Jimmy?"
"Your boyfriend? Yeah."
"Well, the other night he took me to a romantic dinner and then after I slept with him. We were safe and everything, but then I started throwing up. I didn't know what was wrong...because we had used protection. But I decided to completely rule out the possibility so my friend bought me a pregnancy test in Hartford. I took it...and it's positive. I'm pregnant." Liz broke down again.
"Wow. Pregnant. Wow." Lorelai said. "I'm not helping am I. Liz, your father and Luke love you so much. Believe me, they will get over it. There will be a little bit of yelling, but I promise you everything will be fine because they are amazing, great and wonderful people who would do anything in the world for you." Lorelai said. It seemed to calm Liz down.
"But...there's a human being growing inside of me. I'm going to be a mother. I'm only 15!" Liz said. She had turned 15 a month ago.
"It's going to be hard Liz. I'm 15 too...I couldn't imagine being pregnant. I can't even imagine losing my virginity."
"Do you really think everything will be all right?"
"Yes, I do. You'll get through this with the help of Luke, your Dad and me. Anything you need, I'm here for you."
"Anytime Liz." They heard the door open, and immediatly started talking about random girl stuff.
"Hey Lorelai." Luke said, walking into the room where she was with Liz and kissing her. "How long have you been here?"
"On the Earth almost 16 years. In your living room about 20 minutes."
"Uh huh. I'll go get changed, then we'll go see walk around town a bit...maybe see a movie or something."
"K." Lorelai said brightly. Luke ran up the steps 2 at a time.
"So are you okay? For the most part at least?" Lorelai asked Liz once she heard Luke's bedroom door shut.
"Whenever you need to talk...I'm right next door. And you have my phone number right? If you don't get it from Luke."
"K thanks again Lorelai."
"No problem Liz. I'll probably be back for dinner, so see you then." Lorelai said as Luke came back downstairs.
"Bye guys." Liz said. (A/N so tired...must sleep. I'll try and finish tomorrow...)
(A/N and now it's the 15th!)
"See ya Liz." Lorelai said, smiling. Luke took her hand and they walked out of the house.
"Hey." Luke said once the door shut.
"Hey." Lorelai said, and kissed him, longer than the short kiss they shared inside. (A/N AHHH I JUST FIXED MY I KEY I AM SOOOO EXCITED!!!)
"So where are we going?" Luke asked, putting his arm around her waist.
"I don't know...the town's starting to get boring." Lorelai admitted.
"Starting to?" Luke asked. Lorelai laughed.
"Where else is there to go?" Lorelai wondered.
"We could go to Woodbridge or something." Luke said. Lorelai wrinkled her nose at that. They walked in silence for a minute...thinking. Then Luke looked up.
"I know where we're going."
"Where?" Lorelai asked.
"Come on." He pulled her to the car, and opened her door. When she was in, he shut it and literally ran to the driver's side.
"Luke, what?" Lorelai asked as he shut his door. "Where are we going?"
"It'll take about an hour to get there." Luke said.
"To get where?" Lorelai asked.
"Trust me, you'll love it." He said. (A/N I so don't know where to go from here...but I can't end it because it would be wayyyy too short. What should I do, what should I do?)
They pulled up into a parking lot, and Luke parked the truck. He got out and took Lorelai's hand. They walked onto the deserted sandy beach.
"Luke what beach is this?"
"It doesn't have a name. It's just here. My Mom used to always take Liz and me." Luke said.
"Wow. It's really beautiful." Lorelai said. It was small, but looked like it belonged in a picture or on a calendar.
"Sit." Luke said, as he sat down.
"I don't want to get all sandy." Lorelai said. Luke rolled his eyes. Lorelai giggled and sat on him. "Thank you for taking me here Luke. It's so pretty."
"Yeah. It is." Luke said. Lorelai smiled and kissed him. They made out on the beach and ended up Lorelai practically laying on top of Luke. (dirty!) "I love you Lorelai."
"I love you too Luke." They kissed again. They layed there for about an hour, just enjoying the time together, away from Stars Hollow. It was their own little place to get away from everything from then on.
"We should probably start to head home." Luke said.
"Yeah." They got up and dusted the sand off their clothes. Then they walked to Luke's car. On the way home Luke told Lorelai all about the times when his Mom would take him to the beach.
"Hey you guys are finally back?" William asked as they walked in the door. "Where did you go? I didn't see you around town all day."
"We just went somewhere else." Luke said.
"Somewhere." William eyed Luke suspiciously. "Not a motel." Luke added. Lorelai's mouth dropped open and she blushed.
"All right. Dinner will be ready in a minute. Can you get your sister?" Luke started heading toward the stairs, but Lorelai stopped him.
"I'll get her." Lorelai said. She went upstairs and knocked on Liz's door.
"Who is it?" Came the muffled response.
"It's me, Lorelai. Can I come in?" Lorelai asked. Liz opened the door. "Dinner's gonna be ready soon." Lorelai said.
"I'm not really that hungry." Liz said, not looking at Lorelai. She decided not to press it because she knew Liz must be going through the worst time right now.
"K. I'll tell them." Lorelai backed away, and turned around. She heard Liz's door close, and walked down the steps. "Liz isn't feeling well." Lorelai stated as she walked into the kitchen. Luke was setting the table.
"All right, more for us then." William said. He served dinner and they ate. Lorelai was mostly silent throughout the meal, adding a few nods and laughs along the way. She was mostly thinking to herself.
'What would happen if Luke did take me to a motel?'
'What if it wasn't Liz. What if it were me?'
I'm evil. Very very short chapter. It's called writer's block.
Review. You'll throw a house on Chris.