True Jinchuriki

Chapter 1: Deal with the Demon (rewritten)

Disclaimer: I claim no ownership over Naruto or any other officially published works.

Well this is my first Fanfic which I started two years ago, and now I am fixing it.


"Please, I come to you on bent knees to beg for your aid." The six-year-old, blond-hair boy said as he knelt on the hard, stone floor of the chamber. "I humbly beg you teach me and help me stronger, so I can make my dream come true." He paused, "I know that you don't like me, nobody does, but please consider my request."

Seeing that he would receive no answer the little boy stood and turned away. "I guess I shouldn't have expected anything from you, it's not like you care."

"You're right about that, I don't. But I am curious, what's your dream, and don't tell me it's to be Hokage." came a voice from the darkness.

The blond turned around and looked straight into the terrifying red eyes of his potential teacher. "I will find others like me and bring them together away from the hatred and prejudice of those fools who fear us!" he said with an almost maniacal grin on his face.

"Is that so gaki, and how are you going to find every one like yourself and get them away from those who control them. They aren't likely to let their strongest weapons be stolen just like that."

"That's why I will get strong and beet up anyone who tries to stop me." He answered with a shrug.

The great beast laughed uproariously at the simple answer.

"What are you laughing at?" asked the blond in an offended voice.

"You have spunk Kit, I like that." The massive demon looked down at the small child on the other side of the giant cage door. "I will train you and help you get power if you can pass my test."

"What you want me to do" was the exited response

"Take this scroll and study it, if you can master the technique in one month's time I will accept you as my student and partner." As he spoke a menacing red fog flowed out of the cage and formed a scroll in the boy's hands.

"Thank you sensei," The boy smiled brightly and faded away.

"I wonder if he can actually do it," Said the Kyuubi with a quiet chuckle.


After leaving his mindscape Naruto looked around, he was in his dingy apartment, with its peeling wallpaper and worn furniture, provided by the Hokage. The Hokage, as Naruto thought about it he realized that the Hokage was the only reason he was still in this town, he was the only one who had been kind to Naruto in the past.

Looking down at the scroll in his hands Naruto nearly fainted. "He expects me to master this in one month?" he nearly yelled.

In his hands was one of the most advanced techniques he had ever read, which wasn't saying much. "Onitsume" (Oni: Ogre/demon Tsume: claw/ talon) he read.

"This might be harder than I thought."

And so Naruto trained in secret in the deepest parts of the forest, at empty training grounds, and at school under his desk.

Soon a month had passed and the young ninja-wannabe was ready, or as ready as anyone can be to stare into the face of a giant fox demon that can decimate a small town with an effort of will.


The Meeting went well, he proved that he could use basic charka attacks even with just his own charka and now it was time to learn how to harness the power of the demon.


AN: in case people have noticed, I fixed some things in this chapter and changed the format slightly to match my latest story, Jack of Spades. To be honest I find this format to be easier and more visually appealing so I will probably be using it in all my stories from now on.