Okay, so I want to apologize for my lack of updates. But I entered a new grade this year and got a great Language arts teacher who actually READS whatever I write and doesn't justr give me an automatic A. I think, with all this new knowledge, I could greatly improve one of my story's. That's what I need my readers help in: Which one should I redo? I would keep the orginal up, so you can compare. It can be your favorite, my worst one, the one with the least descriptions/flat story. I don't care, I just feel productive. Just make sure you don't pick a story you wont read because it will have pretty much the same story line. I sorry about the lack of updates, but I will try to fix it. I promise.