Story Title:How can One Phone CAll Change Everything?
Chapter Title: The news
Nick Stood up when the doctor walked out to him. THere was blood on his
scrubs and Nick knew that the blood on the doctor belonged to Jack.
Nick: How is he?
Doctor: He's hanging on. We managed to stopt he bleeding and repair his
But durignt he surgery his heart stopped.
N:WHAT? BUT I THOUGHT U SAID...
D: We were able to get it beating again. but that caused Jack to slip
comma and he stopped beign able to breathe on his own. We have him on a
ventalator until he wakes up.
Sam:When will that be?
D: With a person in a comma who also has a bad head injury u can never
N: Can we see him?
D: For tonight it'd be best if just u and ur wife saw him,but the rest
can see him when visiting hours start tomorrow morning.
N: Thank You
D: ur welcome
Maggie: NICk,U ready to go see him?
N: ur coming with me?
M: WEll, I thought since they think I'm his mother that I should act
N: Thanks. Sam u guys get a cab okay?
S: OKay dad
N: ok bye I love u boys.
S: Dad can u call if anything changes?
N: I will
S: THanks Bye DAd
IN JACK'S HOSPITAL ROOM
Nick stepped into the room first and almost started cryign his eyes
what he saw.
Jack was lying there so helpless barely haning on to life.
He sat down in he chair nearest to the bed and gently grabbed Jack's
caerful on the heart monitor.
Nick watched his son's heart rate. He then realized that hes been
children for granted. HE watched as Jack's chest was machically rising
falling as air was forced into his lungs. He stared at his son. THere
bruised everywhere. His right leg was in traction haning over the bed.
was probably the most disturbing was the ube sticking out of his son;s
and the tape across his son;smouth keeping it in place. There were
everywhere. HE realized that these machines were needed to keep his
HE had seen Jack like this before and he had hoped he never would nhave
gain but obviously he was wrong.
He felt Maggie place a han don his shoulder and he then thoguth of hte
time Jack had been in this state.
15 years ago
i don't know the mom's name so we're just gonna call her Grace
Grace wsa laying in a hospital bed rubbing her pregnant stomach. She
7 months pregnant and her water broke this morning. This hadn't
her two previous children. She had just recemtly fund out hat this baby
boy like her other two.
She was terrified of loosing this baby. She knew she'd ahve to deliver
but hte longer this abyw as in the womb the better chance he had.
Nck was sittign there holding her hand with a hand placed on her
This baby was so tiny. THe doctor then came ina nd said it was time for
c-section. She coudln't deliver vainally b/c the bay was breached.
couldn't wait b/c the baby ws getting aggitated. THey needed to get him
Grace was lying there she could feel the doctors pulling her son out of
Shewas listenign closely for a cry. She felt the baby be pulled
out of her and she heard a very faint cry. It was so weak.
THe Doctor put him to where she coudl catcha glance of him an dhe was
out of hte corner of her eye she saw a team of neonatologist over her
boy. She saw one inserting a tube down his tiny throat. after teh
him stable enougt he was place din an incubater and wheele dout fo the
The nest tiem her and Nick saw him he looked so weak.
Nick touched the baby's tiny arm. HE was afraid to put too much
case the baby would break.
They decided to name the baby Jack Michael Savage.
Jack gto strogner everyday three weeks afte rJakc was born Nick was
toh old his son for the first time. This bbay was so much stronger than
one that he was afraid to touch.
Jack was able to go home on his due date 2 months after his birth.
Garce na dNIck walked inot the house and saw Jimmy sitting onth e couch
Chris and Sam.
Both toddlers were excited to see their new baby brother.
Nick looked down at the tiny baby in his arms and his he baby's
thankful that he had made it through.
END OF FLASHBACK
Nick sat there stroking his unconscious son;s hand.
He gently placed a kiss on the boy's forehead.
He didn't know if he's be able to go through this again. He knew though
he'd ahve to for the his son especially Jack.
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