Revenge (Remix version)
Authors Note: Mr. Lee wrote this one-shot by mixing my Revenge story with some lemon and OOC: ness in it and send it to me. And he also said that I can do anything I want with it, so I decided to post it for all of you to read. So ladies and gentlemen, here is the first Eva fanfic by Mr. Lee.
evening, 8 P.M.
Misato was at NERV on a night shift until the morning and that left Shinji
alone with Asuka in the apartment.
was sitting on his bed with a scowl on his face, thinking how to
Asuka squirm. He was thinking how to do this, since she had embarrassed him again at school in front of everyone by lying to them that he had tried to kiss her while she
truth was that she had been sleepwalking and she had laid down on his
and tried to kiss him in her sleep, but of course, she twisted it so it was
now she was watching TV and was wearing those really short shorts
that sleeveless shirt that covered the upper part of her belly and breasts. So
now it was Shinji's turn to make her feel like hell had just frozen.
'It's about time for me to get my revenge on you Asuka! Even if I have to break
thought as he chuckled evilly,
but not enough for the Red
Devil to hear him. Nobody knew, but Shinji has been pretending to be anti
social for the whole time, since he wanted to get to know people better before
being their friend, since he hated rude people, and Asuka was the second
rudest person he has ever met, rivalled only by his bastard of a father, Gendo
Ikari. Shinji left his room and stealthily walked behind her.
Asuka!" Shinji said in a creepy singsong voice. Asuka jumped from
couch in fright and turned around, only to see Shinji smiling slyly.
"GODDAMN BAKA HENTAI SHINJI! DON'T SNEAK UP ON ME LIKE THAT!"
The red head shouted angrily. As soon as the words came out of her mouth, Shinji's smile turned into an evil one.
Langley Soryu, you have been mean and rude to me from day one.
you're going to pay for it!" He said in an evil tone. When he finished
that sentence, he ran around the couch and quickly covered her mouth with a
handkerchief, which was soaked in chloroform. Shinji had acquired the
chloroform from Ritsuko's lab a few days back. Asuka tried to resist, but
Shinji's headlock combined with the liquid on the cloth was too strong for
her and soon, she fell asleep.
woke up some time later, only to
see that she was in Shinji's room
and that she was his prisoner. Her hands were bind by handcuffs that was
hooked in an iron bar that kept her arms in the air while her legs were bound
by separate handcuffs as well. She also noticed her clothes and underwear were
removed leaving her bare to the world.
going on? When I find Shinji, I going to kill him!"
Asuka growled out loud. She tried to wiggle herself free from her restraints,
but it was no use.
you finally woke up Asuka. Good. Since this is where the fun
begins." Shinji's cool voice said from behind her which strangely
frightened and excited her at the same time.
"Goddamn it you baka. RELEASE ME NOW!"
Asuka yelled as she continued to struggle. That is until a Swiss army knife touched her back.
don't try to talk, since you are going to need all the energy
have in order to survive my treatment."
Shinji warned her as he put the knife in front of her. Asuka took the advice and stopped talking. He then walked in front of her, dragging a chair and sat on it and looked her in the eyes along with a knife and a SDAT in his hand.
listen carefully. I'm
to become your master and you'll be my lover and servant. And
on how you act, you will feel little or no pain. You may even enjoy
I'm about to do to you, it's up to you. And when I ask you a
or give you an order, you are going to call me master instead of Shinji and
you'll obey all my commands without question, without lip and without
backtalk. If you disobey me in any way, you'll be punished severely.
explained to her in a commanding tone. The beautiful redhead
from Germany couldn't believe her ears with what her fellow pilot just told
her. But at the same time, a part of her was somewhat aroused with the idea.
'I only called him a pervert out of anger. I never knew he was one.'
Asuka thought. Shinji sat there quietly in his chair with a look of confidence
on his face, waiting for his answer as her thoughts ran through her head. She
decided to test the waters to see if he was serious.
"Oh please Shinji! You're too much of a weak baka to carry out what you just said." She said with a sarcastic chuckle.
"I had a feeling you'd say that."
The young man said with an evil smile. He put the knife and his SDAT on his bed and went behind the red head.
then pulled his hand back and gave her a resounding smack on her
causing her to yelp out in pain. She was about to protest, but he continued to
smack her rear, hitting each cheek in rapid succession. Each hit became harder
and harder and it started to bring the Red Devil into tears. After thirty
minutes of hard spanking, she now knew that Shinji was serious.
more!" Asuka whimpered in defeat.
"Do you believe me now?" He asked as he removed his hand.
"Yes." She cried.
"Yes what?" Shinji said as he pulled his hand back as if getting ready to
smack her again.
"Yes master." She said obediently.
"That's better my Red Angel." Shinji said in a warm voice.
hand to her rear and Asuka braced herself for another spanking.
instead of a sharp hit, Shinji instead began to rub and caress her rear as he
gave a melting kiss to the nape of her neck. At first it felt like acid to her
behind, but it slowly started to arouse her as a pressure began to rise inside
her body, causing her to let out a moan against her will.
"Are you enjoying my touch my Red Angel?"
He asked as he nibbled on her neck while continuing his massage on her rear.
master." Asuka said as her eyes glazed over in a daze courtesy
his gentle touch.
see Asuka? A good lover and servant always obeys his master and
always rewarded. Those who disobey will be punished. Do you understand?"
He asked as he stopped his kisses and caressing.
understand master. I'll
do whatever you say. Asuka said in a
desperate tone as she pushed her behind back in an attempt to reach his hand.
smiled and continued his rubbing as he kissed her neck and used
free hand to caress her right nipple with his forefinger and thumb which
caused her to moan once more. This continued for several minutes until he
stopped and returned to the front of her, just before she was about to come.
He picked up the SDAT and placed the headphones on her ears while placing the
player on a desk next to her. He hit the play button and Asuka began to hear
Shinji's voice saying many phrases.
am your lord and master Asuka. You will obey my every command. You
serve me and pleasure me without question and without resistance. You will
forever desire my touch, my taste and my scent. You shall love me and serve me
forever my Red Angel.'
His voice on the tape said hypnotically and it continued to play into her ears like a mantra as the young man hit a button to make sure that the tape flipped over and continued non-stop. Once that was settled Shinji took off his shirt until he was bare-chested and moved the chair so he would have enough room to make Asuka his for all eternity.
"Now then, let us begin my Red Angel."
said with a smile as he crushed his
into hers and ravaged her mouth with great enthusiasm. The Red
Devil's eyes widened at first, but eventually they started
flutter until they closed all together as her will to resist started to
crumble. She then began to moan non-stop in his mouth as his hands traced her
body, gently caressing her skin. He broke the kiss and began to kiss the nape
of her neck once more while caressing her rear though and her breast. A few
hours later, Asuka soon lost all track of time, and the pain she felt earlier
vanished and was replaced with pleasure and bliss that possessed her body,
heart and mind.
she would never admit it, Asuka always wanted someone
to break her down and control her like a master does to a servant. That
naughty thought combined with the subliminal message on the tape made it easy
for the young Ikari to do just that. With each touch, kiss and caress to her
body, Asuka became more and more obedient towards Shinji. In time, she began
to repeat the words on the tape as she drowned in the sea of ecstasy.
are my lord and master Shinji. I will obey your every command. I
serve you and pleasure you without question and without resistance. I will
forever desire your touch, your taste and your scent. I shall love you and
serve you forever!"
Asuka said in between moans as Shinji continued to do whatever he wanted to her, making sure he stopped his ministrations just before she came. Once Asuka had repeated the words on the tape consistently without resistance, he stopped the tape and removed her restraints.
there and looked at Shinji after he removed the last of her
The only thing on her mind was of her master and what he was going to do to
have done well Asuka, you now belong to me. Now come to me
beautiful Red Angel."
said in a warm voice as he opened his arms out.
Without a second thought, the beautiful girl ran into his arms. Once in his
embrace, the young Ikari kissed her, and she gladly returned it as he held her
close. She had never felt so happy than she felt at that moment. After putting
away everything and removing any evidence to prevent questions from Misato
later, Shinji and Asuka laid on the bed in his room. She sat on his lap with
her arms wrapped around him while still in the nude and purred happily as he
stroked her long hair.
master." Asuka said happily.
"Asuka, your master has a few questions for you. I want you to answer them
honestly okay?" Shinji requested in a warm voice.
"Yes master!" She replied in compliance as she looked up at him.
"Thank you my Red Angel. First question. Are you mean and violent to people
because you take sadistic pleasure out of it?" He asked.
"No master." The beautiful girl answered honestly.
"No? Are you sure? The young man inquired to make sure she wasn't
"Yes master. I'm sure." Asuka replied obediently.
"Very well, I believe you. Now for question two. Do you really think, that
everything that goes wrong, is not your fault, even if it went wrong because
of you?" Shinji questioned her with a stern face.
"Yes master." She replied sadly with her head hung low.
"I thought so." He sighed. Truth to be told, he wasn't the least bit
surprised by her answer.
question three. Why are you so hostile
for everyone, except Kaji? The young pilot inquired.
"Because no one else is worthy of my kindness except Kaji, and of course
you my lord and master." The red head said honestly as she nuzzled his
"Are you saying that everyone else is lower beings? Shinji asked
"Of course master." Asuka replied without hesitation.
"No wonder you don't have any friends and you are always talking in your
dreams that you don't want to be alone. I heard you say those things when I
passed your room while you were sleeping your first night here."
He said with a sigh. This caused his lover and servant to frown.
Why do you think that nothing in the world your is fault?"
"Because I am the Great Asuka Langley Sohryu, the Red Angel to Shinji
Ikari, my lord and master." She answered proudly.
"Asuka, the only thing great about you is your body and your EVA
training." Shinji countered.
"Are you saying that I'm worthless master?" Asuka asked with sadness.
"I'm saying that being beautiful and an EVA pilot is not great. Saving
the world, feeding the hungry ones, bringing peace to the world, those are
great things to do. If you do all that, then you could honestly call yourself
great." Shinji explained in a warm voice.
"Oh master" Asuka said as she lowered her head. Even if she wasn't his
lover and servant, she couldn't deny that he was right.
"Now then my red angel, here's the final question. "What made you in a way
you are now? In other words, what is the worst memory of your childhood?"
The young pilot asked firmly, but gently.
"The death of my mother." Asuka replied before she could think her
answer. Shinji looked at her with a questioning gaze.
"You lost your mother when you were very young?" He asked in a sensitive
"Yes master." Asuka answered softly as tears fell down her face. The
beautiful girl told him how her mom lost her mind and how she committed
suicide and how she found her. And why she is the way she is now.
"So that's why you are always pushing people away. You didn't want to
get hurt by allowing them to get close to you and then leave you."
"Yes master. I'm sorry I was so mean to you. You must think I'm weak
for crying right now." She sobbed as the tears continued to fall from her
"Asuka, it's not weakness to cry. I believe that crying is something that
strong people do. Let me tell you how I lost my mother when I was at the same
age you were."
said with a smile as he wiped her tears away. Asuka looked
up and Shinji explained how he lost his mother and how his father left him
alone. The beautiful girl now had more respect for the blue eyed boy who was
now her master. He had a similar kind of trauma as she had.
can I tell you something?" She asked suddenly.
"Of course my Red Angel." Shinji replied as his ears perched up.
"When I first saw you, I noticed that you were very cute and when I got to
know you more, I liked those things about you. Your caring nature, kindness,
and pretty much everything about you I truly liked. But I was too afraid to
admit it because I didn't think you would like me." She explained while
looking into his eyes
"Why wouldn't I like you Asuka?" He asked.
"Because I was a total bitch to you master, especially when we first met. You
had every reason to hate me." She replied with regret laced in her voice.
"You were just acting like one. Now that I know the truth and that you
belong to me, your master promises to treat you well as long as you obey me
and try to do better with your life." He said honestly. Asuka's eyes
widened as tears fell down her face.
"Thank you so much master!" Asuka cried as she wrapped her arms around
him and nuzzled his chest. Shinji pulled her to him gently and placed his hand
behind her head. Then without hesitation he captured the lips of his lover and
servant in a passionate kiss. Asuka immediately began to moan against him, as
she gave no resistance. Her arousal rose a hundred fold as her sacred spot
began to get wet. Shinji broke the kiss and took off his clothes as his
servant waited for him.
Once that was accomplished, he continued to kiss her lips and caress her heavenly mounds of delight.
were right my Red Angel. Your breasts have come in nicely."
said in a husky voice as he broke the kiss and looked at Asuka's body.
"I'm glad that you like them master." The beautiful girl said with a
"Now let's see how they truly feel." He said as he started to suck one
while massaging the other.
"Aaah master!" Asuka moaned and as her body experienced shock waves of
"Let me hear your moans, my Red Angel." He whispered into her ear and he
inserted a finger into her flower and caressed her breast faster and continued
his sucking on the other, making her moan even more.
"Yes master! I will obey!" The beautiful girl moaned as her moans became
more frequent and louder, which turned Shinji on and made his finger go deeper
and faster inside her. This lasted for what seemed like an eternity until the
red head was on the breaking point and she let out a strong moan of pleasure
when she came. When she finally recovered, he kissed her gently and laid her
spread your legs Asuka. It's time to become one with your
master." Shinji commanded her. She immediately obeyed without hesitation.
Once that was done, he kissed her again and went inside her until they were
broke the kiss and threw her head back and moaned when he went
her. After she recovered from entering her, Shinji kissed her once again and
started to thrust in and out of her, which made her drown in the sea that was
ecstasy. She absolutely loved the feelings he was giving her as she wrapped
her arms and legs around her master. The beautiful girl lifted her hips up
with every thrust to take every ounce of her master. Shinji rewarded her
enthusiasm by kissing her even more passionately and caressing her breasts
while thrusting faster and faster. She truly felt like she was in heaven. When
the sensations reached their breaking points, they came at the same time as
the young woman let out an earthshaking moan. Asuka knew at that point that
she belonged to him forevermore, and she would do anything to please him.
After Shinji came out of her, he pulled her close as Asuka immediately
snuggled into his chest.
"Did you enjoy that my Red Angel?" Shinji asked with a warm smile.
"Oh master, that was amazing. I never felt so alive!" The red head said
"Well get used to it Asuka, because you belong to me, now and forever."
Shinji said as he kissed her once more.
"Yes master. As your lover and servant, I promise to serve you well." She
replied with determination after he broke the kiss.
"I know that you will. Now then, would you like to pleasure me on top?"
The young pilot asked with a perverse grin.
"I would love to, my lord and master." Asuka replied in a sultry tone.
beautiful girl got on top of him and began to moan as she started to
him while he caressed her breasts. She continued to please him for the next
hour until she fell asleep in his arms.
next day at school
"Toji, Kensuke. I'm sorry for the way I've acted and for all the things
I've said since we met. I hope you two can forgive me." Asuka said in an
apologetic tone as she bowed politely to Shinji's friends. Needless to say,
it completely shell shocked the both of them.
"Alright, who are ya and whadidya do to Asuka?" Toji chortled loudly.
"Do you want to lose your teeth monkey boy?!" She growled angrily as she
grabbed his collar and pulled back her fist.
"Asuka. Remember what we talked about this morning." Shinji said in a
neutral, but warning tone. After hearing his voice and being reminded of the
conversation they had at breakfast, she couldn't disobey him and
begrudgingly released her grip on Toji's collar. This caused the both of
them to raise an eyebrow.
"Do you truly mean that Asuka?" Kensuke inquired.
"Yes. I talked with Shinji-kun last night and he showed me the error of my
ways. I'm truly sorry guys." She apologized once again in a sincere
does Ikari always get the girls?" Kensuke thought
in that case, we accept your apology. Right Toji?" The
glasses wearing middle school boy said as he gave his friend a jab to the
"Alright. I accept your apology. I'm sorry too." Toji said in a
"Thanks guys. I hope we can be friends." Asuka said with an honest to
goodness smile on her face which slightly scared Toji, but made
she went over to Rei's desk with Shinji by her
side. "Hey, Ayanami?" She called out quietly to the first child as she
read her book.
do you want Pilot Soryu?" Rei asked in her usual monotone voice
she continued to read her book. The red head turned to her master for
guidance. Shinji smiled and nodded, telling her to continue.
wanted to apologize for the way I've treated you since we
met. I have no excuse for the things I said to you. As a fellow Eva pilot, I
ask for your forgiveness and I hope we can get along."
said as she
once again. Rei lifted her head and looked at the second child with
widened slightly. The mysterious blue haired girl turned and looked
who she had started to become closer to. Shinji looked at her
nodded silently as if to tell her that the red head was being truthful.
understand. As a fellow Eva pilot, I accept your sincere apology
Soryu." Rei said honestly.
you Ayanami. And please, call me Asuka." She requested. Rei
to Shinji again, feeling slightly confused at the request. The pilot of unit
one simply smiled again and nodded.
well Asuka. You may call me Rei if you wish." The pilot of
zero said before returning to her book.
you." The red headed girl said happily before she walked over
and started talking to Hikari. As Rei went back to her book, Shinji smiled at
his girl and went over to pack his books for the trip home. Toji and Kensuke
walked over to and started talking to him.
Talk about an about face. She seems almost like a different
person." Kensuke said matter-of-factly.
said it Aida. What did you
two talk about Ikari?" Toji asked out
"Let's just say that revenge is a dish best served hot." Shinji said in
a cryptic voice as he packed his books in his bag with a sly smile on his
"Don't you mean that revenge is a dish best served cold?" Kensuke
"I know what I said." The young man said as he finished packing. "Come
on Asuka. Let's go home." He said in a slightly louder voice.
coming Shinji-kun! See you tomorrow Hikari." Asuka said as
waved goodbye to her friend. When she came over, she wrapped her arms around
her master's and they walked out of class together leaving a very befuddled
Toji and Kensuke. As they walked down the street, Shinji started to speak.
"I'm very proud of you my Red Angel." Shinji said as he kissed her
"Thank you ma-, I mean Shinji-kun." Asuka said happily as she started to
blush, remembering to only call him Shinji-kun in public and master when
"Now you'll have more friends and you won't feel so alone." He said.
"Yes. Though I still want to punch that monkey boy's teeth out for
laughing at me." She said with puffed cheeks and a slight growl.
"Well at least Toji apologized for teasing you, so don't be too mad about
it." The young man chuckled.
"Yeah, I guess you're right Shinji-kun." Asuka said in a sulking tone.
"Come on now Asuka, you did really well today. For a reward, I'll make a
very special dinner tonight." Shinji said happily.
Shinji-kun! I know I'll love it! Just like I love you."
beautiful girl said as she kissed him on the cheek and increased her embrace
on his arm.
love you too Asuka. Don't worry my Red Angel, I'll
take care of
you." Shinji vowed to her.
I shall love and serve you forever Shinji-kun." Asuka vowed to
Shinji smiled and when he noticed that they were alone, he gave her a
passionate kiss as the sun started to go down. The rest of their life is
another thing. But one thing is certain. In this case, revenge truly was a
dish best served hot.
Authors Note: Well here is the end and I hope you liked it. I had to fix some errors, but it was Mr. Lee who wrote this one-shot. You can give some mail to him and give him comments about this. I can't take all the credit about this. His account is in this address: