Hey everyone! Thanks so much for the feedback on this story. I wrote it ages ago, but I've really started itching to write again.
I'll continue posting on here, of course, but I've also just made a livejournal page where I'll try out some writings and get feedback before I post anything on you want to check it out, you can stop by at jordanliane. Birthday Teddy is already posted on there, but if you have any suggestions to how I can better/further the story, please comment!
Thanks ) I'm looking forward to writing more and hearing back from everyone!