12 Hours

Dis: not mine

Purpose: I couldn't make up my mind about putting this in Harry Potter and the new Defense Teacher, so it is a missing scene.


Hour: One and Two

Jack O'Neill shook his head as he explored Thor's ship. Hallways, rooms, more hallways, and even more rooms. There didn't seem to be anything interesting on board and Jack wanted to find out the person(s) responsible for their forced containment and hex, curse, or prank them. Possibly a combination of all three.

Two years from now, Jack would certainly remember this incident, though in a daze he would be. But that is for another time.

Presently, Daniel was walking up to him. "Hey, Jack! Sam said I should watch you. Never know what could be on this ship."

"Doesn't Thor have that alarm system?" Jack questioned, leading his friend down another hallway.

"Sure, but things could get past the radar. Wouldn't surprise me in this galaxy anymore," Daniel muttered, looking into a room.

"Danny," Jack paused and turned to face him. "Shouldn't I be saying things like that?"

Shrugging, Daniel answered, "Maybe you're rubbing off on me. I wonder how many other people are acting like you…"

'If I have anything to say about it, a lot of kids will,' Jack thought silently, walking into a room on a whim. "Hey, I have a question for you."

"What's wrong?" Daniel asked, walking in after him.

"Why are the lights dimmer in here than in the rest of the ship?"

As if on cue, the doors slid shut behind them.

"What the- ? Carter! What's going on?"

"I don't know, sir. The systems that are in charge of that area aren't responding. Thor says that this shouldn't be happening, or that's what I think he's been saying. Either way, sir, Teal'c has been locked in another room. If it's alright, I'm going to get him out first."

"Alright, Carter. Get T out first. He might be able to help you figure out how to get us out of here."

"Yes, sir. Carter out."

Jack looked at Daniel, who shrugged. "Danny, did I mention that this is going to be a long 12 hours?"


Hour Three

"Carter, we have been on this ship for three hours now and our check- in should be coming up soon. What is your progress?" Jack questioned for boredom's sake. Daniel was writing in his journal and hadn't been much fun.

"Not much, sir. We're still trying to get Teal'c out, but no dice. I think the power is low on that end. I'm guessing that it will take time. We just don't know how much, sir."

"Keep me appraised, Carter. O'Neill out."

Jack slid down the wall he was leaning against and watched Daniel scribble away. It reminded him of his own journals, five of which he had lost at Hogwarts. One of them was in his house and the journal of his seventh year he had somehow misplaced, yet had a sneaking suspicion that it was lost in his common room.

"Teal'c?"

"I am present, O'Neill."

"Everything fine on your end?"

"It is."

"Keep me updated. O'Neill out."


AN: I think there will be three more chapters. Does anyone know how long a missing scene is?

8-10-07

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