okay, so looking back at my old chapters that i wrote i realize this story sucked.

heh. yeah, i feel bad for everyone who read it before.

i believe i am a better writer now, well at least i hope! :)

so, somehow, this story became popular, and i would like to make it a bit better, so i don't feel so horrible. yeah.

anyway, um, well here it is.

i hope you enjoyy.