A/N- Just to clear things up: Alright, this story picks up after Eclipse, (well, probably after Breaking Dawn, but that's not out yet, so you know what I mean). Bella and Edward are already married, and the first chapter is basically Bella during the transformation.
Disclaimer: This is Fan Fiction, meaning: I OWN NOTHING!!!! (Stephenie Meyer owns the wonderful series, NOT ME!!)
A/N (Yes, again)-Now that that's all cleared up, on with the story!
Chapter 1: The Transformation
Who knew a pain so great could exist? I screamed in agony. The screaming just hurt more. The pain was unbearable. It was a great pain, a pain no one deserved. My entire body felt as if it were on fire, certainly not a pleasant feeling.
I could feel my heartbeat slowing with each passing hour(just a figure of speech, I wasn't keeping track of time). Each time it beat, the venom was pushed farther and farther into my veins. With each heartbeat a new string of screams came, for each heartbeat was much more painful than the previous one.
I could feel myself screaming. I wanted to stop, but I couldn't. It was as if some unknown force was making my larynx vibrate, making incoherent sounds escape my lips. My scream just kept getting louder and louder with each passing minute, each passing hour. I didn't know how long I've been like this. As I've said, I wasn't keeping track of time - it's not exactly the easiest thing in the world to keep track of time when you're enduring the greatest pain you've ever had.
Why am I being put through such pain? I thought to myself. One answer instantly popped into my mind. "EDWARD!" I screamed my angel's name with all my might. I saw his angelic features twisted up into a look of pain, a look of pure agony. What's wrong with him? Why is he so upset. It was odd how I could even worry about him when my body felt as if it was on fire.
I screamed once again. "EDWARD!" Then a thought suddenly came to mind. Something I didn't think of. He thinks he did this to me That's why he's so upset.
"I'm so sorry, Bella." Those were the last words I heard before the darkness overtook me.
A/N (Yes, AGAIN!)
Alright this was Chapter 1 of my new story Transformed. I'm not completely sure of where this story is going, my heart is writing it, not my mind (alright, that sounds corny, but its true). If you want more, or have any ideas, just let me know(I need help thinking of her power!). If you don't, still, let me know! This is my first fan fiction, so constructive criticism is helpful (by the way, constructive criticism means tips and helpful things like that, NOT nasty notes about how much you hate my story). Please Review and let me know how you like it!!!
Thanks a bunch,
P.S.- The second story is already written on paper. I just have to type it, and if you guys review, then I'll type it and post it faster!