Sorry for the long delay. I've been busy with marching band and that took up majority of my time. I started a forum for this story so i can post ideas as i come up with them, and i can get active criticism. Do not fear, the second chapter is under way, but ist going slower than i would hope. i hope to have it up in a week or so. So check i my forum, title Naruto:Mikomi Hanyou, and link of it is in my profile. Cheers