Hello again, looking back at this story I can't help, but be terribly disappointed with it so I am currently considering doing a redux of this story. It would be a total rewrite where I will not only redo every chapter, but the only thing that will remain the same is the plot. I plan to take out scenes, write new ones, and change old ones—the works. However, before I do this, I need to know whether people would even be interested in it, so I have posted a poll on my personal site where people can vote on this.
Link to the poll: www. cosmopolitan411. webs. com