Disclaimer: Please not that I do not in any way own Harry Potter.
Of Magic and Minds
By Untamed of Wildwind
The now dead woman's body fell to the floor. The Dark Lord took a step towards the sleeping baby boy, and whispered:
"And here, my bane, ends your story…" He gathered himself for a second, and once again, raised his wand.
The green light flew to the baby, hitting him in the middle of his forehead.
Then something strange happened. A glow lit up around the baby, and a set of silvery symbols appeared around the curse's impact point.
"What in the world…?" said the Dark Lord.
The baby opened his eyes, which was completely white, and shone brightly.
A number of energy bolts left the baby, most impacting with the man and burning his body to crisps while ripping his soul out of it.
The glow and the symbols then slowly disappeared, while the house caught on fire and the greater part of the Dark Lord's spirit flew away to save itself.
Soon the baby would be picked up by a half-giant and carried on a flying motorcycle to his last remaining relatives, so that his mother's sacrifice would keep him safe from harm. The problem was, that sacrifice didn't work that way…
It split and empowered.
Is it any good? Should I keep writing it?