I would like to thank all my readers/reviewers. I got 21 author alerts and 6 story favorites on Say Anything. This is the shortest story I've ever written. The thing below is the rest of the conversation. (cheesy as you readers like it). Then after is a preview for my next story called the list. It is based off a story on another board called Epiphany. It's a really good story. Anyway. The preview is below. I always do my previews like it. It's kind of like a movie preview. I just like it like that. Enjoy!
Carly walked forward carefully.

"What are you doing here?" Freddie lifted himself off the bed.

"Isn't it obvious?" HE paused for a second. "I've fallen in love with a girl named Carly Shay."

"Freddie."

"I can't imagine my life without you."

"Let's play truth or truth." Carly said catching Freddie off guard.

"Ok." He said only half sure where this was going.

"I'm so glad you came, and I wish I didn't have to leave Seattle. Especially you." She confessed.

"I was afraid that if I didn't come after you, I would loose the only girl I ever loved." Loved. The word rang in her head. "The only question is, are you in love with me too?" Carly rolled her eyes as she came up to him and kissed him. He was surprised, but he kissed back. They pulled apart from the embrace.

"What do you think?" She pushed his shoulder playfully. "But if you want me." She leaned in. "You'll have to catch me." The two chased each other around the room; their laughter was a witness to all who heard, of their growing love.

Sneak peek of The List

Their meeting was chance:

"Let me help you with that."

"Thanks." Her eyes were glued to the mess she had made.

"My name is Travis." Carl's eyes jumped p, and she felt her breath got caught in her throat."

"Carly." She returned.

But things are not what they seem:

"What's this?" Sam held the paper, "Eating Lunch together 10 points, name and number 10 points, first kiss 30 points."

"He's playing her." All the emotion was drained from his voice.

And now if only...

"So what did you want to tell me?" She looked so innocent standing there. He felt discussed that she had been used.

"Under no circumstance is Carly supposed to read the list."

"What why?" Freddie was holding back him anger.

"We need to figure out a way that she will break up with him, and never find out."

She would listen…

"He's playing you!" He yelled.

"No, he's not!" She raised her voice more.

Give me one good reason why I shouldn't date Travis!" Without thinking, he leaned in and kissed her.

His covered hers just like it had lots of times before, but there was no sparks.

"What's this?" She picked up the crumbled piece of paper.

"Carly, no!"

"Don't talk to Carly." Sam growled.

"Why? What's wrong?" Freddie watched Carly sit at the window watching the rain pour down.

"Just don't." Sam didn't want him pushing the matter.

"Sam, tell me why." He persisted.

"She's suffering from a broken heart." She finally said.


There you go. I've already started the first chapter, so it will be up soon. Review and tell me what you think.