Hey ya again, sorry for the few days late update some family stuff; turkey had to be eaten :D
Anyway the first chapter has been rewriten.
The only real reason for this 'Chapter' is to let the people who have alerts know the Fic was updated and this will be removed in a few days. I'll do the same thing again when the second chapter is rewritten as well, but this adding a Update Chapter thing will stop when the new chapters start being written.
Thanks for reading :D
~Pie Was Here