Forbidden Love

For all who are friggin' hating your asses off go to the bottom and you'll find a note. Please accept my honesty that it won't be all bull. THANK YOU BxTCHES!

Chapter 7

Me: What are you doing Sasuke?

Sasuke: Hee Hee, writing the new version of the story, this time all of it happens in the story...

Me(bends down): How far are you?

Sasuke: I'm about finished, can I read it?

Me: No! At the end of this story, then I guess you could.....

Sasuke: this is the--

Me:(cupped his mouth...again) Okay, they'll find out themselves!


All of sudden, Sakura barged in.

"Save yourself, Sasuke's mine!"said Sakura.

"Sakura-san! I thought it was 'garden' time,"stuttered Sasuke.

"And I thought you were my soulmate! I guess we're both wrong!"said Sakura.

"Soulmate..."whispered Sabrina, then glanced at Sasuke,"What truly is a soulmate?"


Sasuke: God! How dumb is she? Everyone knows that a soulmate is a....what is a soulmate?

Me: You should know!

Sasuke: Oh! So even the one and only author doesn't know!

Me: And the one and only Uchiha is a big dumbass!

Sasuke:...that's not nice!


"If I can't have you,"said Sakura, pulling out something that was behind her.

'A knife!' thought Sasuke, ' Is she, no, she wouldn't dare...'

"...Nobody can!"she screamed as she tried to stab Sasuke, but instead, Sabrina rushed up and was the one stabbed...killed."Good-bye, Uchiha-san,"were Sabrina's last words before she was taken by death's hands, and her dead body fell into Sasuke's shaking arms. Sakura jumped back, after all that blood splattered onto Sasuke's and her faces.


"Heh heh heh heh...HAHAHAHA!!!Finally, heh your mine,"she squeked, sounding like Sasuke, um, you know, it was, uh, okay I don't know which episode, but it's when Sasuke explodes outta the sound 5 coffin, and starts laughing, that part...yeah...that was cool.(Sasuke: Getting of topic!)

Quickly, without thinking, he ripped the knife out of Sabrina, and threw it at Sakura. It hit her hit. She fell onto the cold floor of this horrible day, with a big "thump."

"49 kills..."he said and looked at Sabrina, and saw her soft but scared eyes,"I'm sorry you were brought into this big mess..."

He sighed and grabbed the knife that killed Sabrina, Sakura and will kill him. "My life long goal was to kill 50 people, but it feels unfullfilling(sp?) it or is the day my goal becomes reality,"were his last words and cut his wrists(no, he's not emo...much)...and he had a happy death.

Sasuke: Ahhh! I died!

Me:, that just happened in the story!

Sasuke: Ohhh...

Me: Anyways, Sakura would be dead by now...wait...that's a good thing(as you can see, I'm a Sakura hater)..damn, I wish I had a death note!


Me: Sasuke, are you crying?

Sasuke: No! (me: give him evil glare) Okay yes! It was just so sad!

Me: Okay...wait, you wanted to read your version...

Sasuke: No, it's bad!

Me: Give it!!!! Sasuke: NOOOO!!! (take book away from Sasuke) (then reads it) Me: OMG!! Sasuke! None of that happens! Sasuke: So.... aren't you forgetting something? Me:...right! The comic for this is almost out! If you want to read it I guess you can ask me for the link....

Sasuke: By asking on the review section or a private message!

Me:...sure! What he said...

R&R Hoped you enjoyed the story!

Author's Newest Note:Hey there all you people who discriminate stories! How's it going? I would be very pleased if you shut your trap. Sound harsh? Have you looked at your talk? Not so pleasant. I understand that most dislike OC's, well....who gives a damn? Did I ask you to read it? Okay, you didn't like it, but was it really necessary that you had rant on how it wasn't to your favour? If it wasn't about the whole OC thing, thanks for putting up with THAT. Then there is the whole being offended that I pretty much ruined the thought of SasuSaku or however you would like to describe it. Well, look above and keep your comments. Lastly, if it's about how it's written..well sorry there. I don't like the formation either and how much description its lacking. But within a year, people can develop a much more tasteful way to write. Sorry that I haven't re-formatted it, but I do appreciate that none of you, who don't like it, haven't nagged about it. So in the long run, thank you.

And a thank you to the rest of the ranters, for taking time to read this note....if you even bothered your shameful mouthes. Again, this may sound harsh but have you even looked at some of the bullshit- I mean comments?

I know that you guys probably will but I hope that you don't. Anyways, what I hope is that you won't go ranting off on THIS and saying I have no right to even say this and blah blah blah...sorry I drifted off when you started talking. So don't because I think since it's my story, I get to ask of such things.