Hey guys, this is my first Twilight fanfiction but not my first ever. I try to please, so if it's not up to your standards, please drop me a line but don't be too mean. I don't mind constructive criticism though. Please review. Thanks, Beth xxxxxx.
My breaths were coming out shirt and sharp, the bag over my head didn't help much. The scent was disgusting; I just wanted to throw up. I swallowed the bile that was rising in my throat and gulped. I hoped they'd realise I was missing soon. I needed rescuing.
A gun cocked nearby, the bag was lifted from my head. I was to face with the barrel of a rather frightening looking gun. I gulped.
Help me, save me I though in vain hope.
Thanks for reading, please review so I can improve.
I will update either later today or tomorrow depending on how many reviews I get.