Hi! This is my first fan fiction ever, so please if you have a critique take it easy and make sure its constructive. I live for good reviews, so please review! Also I do not own any Bleach characters or the anime.
Uryuu's cool cobalt eyes flashed menacingly at the smirking pink-haired evil scientist, Szayel Aporro Grantz
"Let. Her. Go." The enraged Quincy snarled as Szayel held the beaten and bloodied form of Rukia Kuchiki.
"I'm afraid I cannot let such a valuable specimen go to waste, even if the subject is dead." Without letting his pitiless yellow eyes leave the furious Quincy archer, he ruthlessly bent back the corpse's arm until a sickening snap was heard across the room.
"You, bastard!" Renji roared as he lay helplessly on the ground unable to move due to the effects of Aporro's manipulative voodoo of the body.
"Hmph. I will be more than happy to relinquish this specimen in exchange for you…my dear Quincy." laughed the demented cotton candy haired freak.
Uryuu's teeth were grinding in anger as another snap of a shattered limb echoed once more. I'm sorry Ichigo. I can't let this go on.
"Now…what will it be? You or her?" sneered Szayel.
"DON'T DO IT!" yelled Renji, his voice cracking at his refusal to save Rukia's body from the inevitable desecration of Szayel's experiments. The soft ring of metal against stone sounded like the death toll of a church bell as Uryu dropped his Steeler sword. Suddenly, he disappeared and within a blink of an eye, Rukia's body vanished only to appear in Renji's bloody arms. Uryuu stepped away from the soul reapers and turned towards Szayel .
"Fine. You can take me now," the Quincy said now quite calmly with his face pale and set.
"Why?" Renji cried as Uryuu walked toward the reaching arms of his future tormentor.
"Why are you doing this?"
"No one deserves to die or to have their bodies torn apart without caring for the dignity of the soul." Uryuu said simply, before he was cruelly stabbed in the back with a painful sedative from the evil and edible henchmen of Szayel.
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