Hey, I'm really sorry that I've been taking so long with this story. For a while I'd felt like I'd lost my Bleach muse and now that it's back and I'm looking at this story, I feel like I could have done so much better with it. It's making it hard to continue with the story when I kind of want to do it better with better structure and organization.

I'm not leaving you without an opinion, however. Tell me what you think of it… should I redo it or continue on from here? And if I do redo it, what aspects of this one would you like to remain as it is in the rewrite?