I'm sorry to disappoint you guys, but this is not a chapter. Well actually it is, but you know what I mean, right?
Well, to the point: I really hate this story. Yes I hate my own story. That's why I practically never update. Yesterday, I was so fed up with myself for writing it, I wanted to delete it. But then, a great Idea struck me: REWRITE IT!
Because, yes I love the idea, but the way I wrote it… Oh I can't even read it myself. I'm actually only happy with the prologue. So, I'm going to rewrite it.
Most things will be the same, only no Jiraija, because, well, he's kind of dead. (though I hate it) And maybe no Kakashi, because he's not really alive at the moment either. But I'm not sure about the last part, since I think this story will be set before the Pain invasion.
But, back to the point, again: I need a little help. What to keep and what to erase? What did you like best in the story? I have a couple of honest opinions before I start. So don't be afraid to be critical! I can take it! I welcome it! And don't tell me it's good the way it is now, because it's not. I just need backup
Last but not least: I would really appreciate a Beta, because you might noticed: my English is not that good.
I will probably update soon, when I get a couple of good opinions about what to do. New ideas are welcome, too!
Anyway: See you again (I hope)!