Hi it's me again with another idea pitch. But this one comes with a chapter!!

Disclaimer: Oh why can't I be Stephanie Meyer!? Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse why do you torture me so?


Rosalie, the model. She's conceited and doesn't care about anything besides herself and other beautiful things.

Alice, the dreamer. Alice always has her heads in the clouds thinking up ideas and fashion designs.

Bella, the mystery. She is alone, guarded and seems to be keeping a terrible thing locked up inside.

Emmet, the prankster. Expelled from his old schools for a couple of extreme pranks.

Jasper, the healer. Dreams to be a psychiatrist are always on his mind but is he completely healed himself?

Edward, the player. He has been with all of the girls, he has everybody wrapped around his finger. His knack for music doesn't make him less popular either.

Six strangers. One house for rent. Six lives changed forever. One intertwined destiny.

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Chapter one: Who's That Girl?


"Eddie Poo. You are so so so sweet. I can't believe you would do this for me." Jessica gushed. This girl is as dumb as a brick. No wait that would be insulting towards the brick. Well at least she can kiss.

Oh how rude of me, I didn't introduce myself properly. My name is Edward Masen, player of Forks high. Well now just Forks, I have graduated. I am musically talented to the extreme but only my parents and I are aware of this. Perfect 4.0 GPA, captain of the foot ball team, and pitcher of the baseball team. Girls throw themselves at me right and left, but hey, I'm not complaining.

Now back to reality. I am currently on a date with Jessica to take my mind off the dilemma of the century. My parents believe I don't know the value of money and say I need to find a place of my own.

"Oh Jess, it's no problem at all." I said as I pushed in her chair at our reserved table at Bella Italia. I took my seat as Jessica chattered on about the latest scandal in or lovely town o' rain.

I pretended to pay attention to her as our waitress came in the form of a spiky haired pixie girl. Problem solved. I could flirt with her and Jessica would get the message she's boring me to tears. I did the victory dance in my head.

"Hi, my name is Alice and I'm going to be your server tonight. Can I start you out with drinks?" She asked in a friendly tone. Jessica ordered a water saying she was watching her weight.

"Well what do you recommend?" I said with a suggestive smile as I raised my eyebrows. Alice stole a glance at a slightly hurt Jessica and back at me with a glace that discreetly said ' You need an escape?' I nodded and she gave a flirty smile and a wink for affect.

"Well it depends on what your taste buds are in the mood for coffee possibly, maybe tea, or would you like me?" She said leaning in slightly. Jessica got up, wacked me with her purse and stormed away muttering to herself the whole way. Alice and I rolled our eyes as we laughed together.

"Thank you so much. I'll catch you around?" I said.

"It was my pleasure and who know when we'll see each other again." With that my savior to a boring evening waltz away.

As I was walking out I noticed a board that had a poster in it. The poster read "House up for 6 way rent. Contact Jasper Whitlock" On the bottom the were strips of the paper cut up that had a phone number on it. Only one of them was gone. This is a perfect opportunity to find a house I thought to myself. So I took one.

On the way home I decided I needed to pour out my happiness and play the piano so I stopped at the music store because Benny always lets me use the piano. As I entered I heard a sound that sounded so heavenly that it could only be an angel. The voice poured out in perfect tune eith the guitar that was played along with it. I ventured father back trying to get a good view of this hypnotizing voice's owner. Right there.

There was a girl. The baggy clothes made it harder to tell but the voice was defiantly that of a female. She had on baggy jeans, converse, and a black hoodie that covered my view of her face. She was perched on her stool and on her lap was an amazing shade of bright blue electric guitar. It's accents were white and the guitar and the girl seemed to glow.

She sad a song heavy with betrayal. Who could hurt such a wonderful creature I thought. The song almost brought tears to my eyes but she didn't seem to notice me. As the last note strummed through the air she got up and put the guitar and was making her way out. But I forgot to move because I was rooted to the spot and I couldn't disappear before she saw me. I was too late she saw me.

I got a glance at her. She had plump cherry colored, kissable lips that stood out against her pale skin. That wasn't what I noticed about her though. It was those eyes chocolate colored and endless. They seemed to be guarded but you could see a mystery in them. There was also pain. Her eyes were mortified as she looked at me realizing that somebody had heard her sing. I wanted to pull her into my arms and comfort and tell her everything is okay.

Right before she disappeared I saw a single crystalline tear slide down her cheek And only a single thought passed trough my head. Who's that girl?

TADA! First chapter is complete! Review puh-wease. You know you loved it. Or did you?

Haha the song that she was supposed to be singing was It's Not Over by Secondhand Serenade.

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