"You smiled." Caspian said trying to hold back his joy. "Can I take that as a yes." He tried not to cry when tears spilled out of Susan's eyes, he promised himself he was going to stay on his knee until she said yes for real.
"Yes, I'll marry you." She managed to get out before he jumped up from his position and squeezed her nearly to death.
Susan was trying to breath but Caspian wouldn't stop kissing her and that was constricting her ability to get air into her lungs. When he finally relented she looked over his shoulder to see something simmering. There off in the field just barely she could make out what look like Lucy jumping up and down and Peter giving Edmund a high five. She blinked and then it was gone. But in the moments that passed afterwards she knew for sure that it was fine, that the world was going to be fine and she had finally found that happy place just for her.
"We have to go tell the council!" Caspian said suddenly. "If I don't tell them soon they are going to smack me for making them wait, they have been on pins and needles for weeks about this."
"You told the council?"
"Well some one had to help me get all the animals to set up this arrangement." Caspian motioned towards the glowing field covered in flowers in bloom.
"Lets go tell the world." Susan said with perhaps the largest smile she had worn since the last time she was queen.
"Okay, but as soon as we are done you are all mine." Caspian swooped in for another breath stealing kiss.
This was the ending I put up way back when and then took down and made a go at starting this back up again. That didn't really happen for those of you who have been with me from the start. I finished the first draft of my original novel and am much more dedicated to that. I have a blog on tumblr if you feel the need to keep up with me. bookbabble(.)tumblr(.)com. I am sorry about all of this. I really did love writing this story at one point but I have put it behind me. My childhood died around the time this story stopped being updated and I can't find that wonder again that originally promoted this.
I would like to thank everyone that ever reviewed. You helped me realize that I was good enough to write something. I would put a lot of getting around to doing my novel on your support. If I get publish I will be sure to tell you.
Thanks guys. -E