Sorry guys, the ending sucked I would've done better, but I started High School and i have a lot of homework to do, so i just hurried and finished the story up.
When I have time, i might write an alternate ending-with the same concept, and more detail. But probably not.
Maybe over break I'll write another story instead, because this one really went no where, it had no climax, I write better than that.
But I'm glad that all of you loved it! I was really shocked to see all positive reviews. Your opinion was valued very much and those who continued to review really encouraged me to keep going. Thanks for all that you've done and actually reading my story.
Honestly guys your reveiws always made my day. Thank you :)