Okay! The rewrite is up. It's called After the Fall and I hope everyone likes it. You can either find it on my profile, or here's the link:

http : // www . fanfiction . net / s / 5798184 / 1 /

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Let me stress how much I want you guys to review! It's the first time I've ever done such a major rewrite in the story, and it'd be great if you guys would review AtF so that I can learn your reactions to it and what I'm doing right and what I should improve upon.