Okay so I once again have an idea for a new story. I have already written 3 and a half chapters and I may or may not post it anytime soon. I may wait until I'm further into play crack the sky, or after I am done with breaking cedric. But I do want to know everyone's opinion in case I do decide to go through with it.
Bella Dunham is a 28 year old single mother one year out of a divorce with her husband of about seven years. She has taken her 15 year old sister in so she can attend a very prestige private school in Bella's neighborhood. She works a job she absolutely despises and her ex-husband has started to date. Her best friends think its time she gets back out there and lets herself fall in love again.
Edward Cullen on the other hand is a 30 year old divorcee of three years. He doesn't really care about anything else but his 8 year old daughter and his work. Everyday he can't help but miss her son who's life was taken away after his ex-wife's reckless hands.
After a night of a babysitting will things change for these two people?
So that's the idea, I don't know if that makes it sound good or anything but hopefully you guys will let me know of your thoughts.
Also, I am searching for a beta for this story so PLEASE PM me if you are interested. Thank you very much.
I have also decided to share a unedited piece from the first two chapters. Bella's POV & Edward's.
Girls always tend to dream about being a princess or some a movie star as they grow up. When I was younger I dreamed about being a character in one of Jane Austen's novels, particularly Elizabeth Bennett. However I knew I would never be a character in a book, no matter how hard I dreamed. I would have to make my own novel, a novel of my life. I figured if I could not be a character in a novel that I would make others fall in love with the characters as well. Well at least that was my plan when I entered college. But as most young girls when they go to college I fell in love. Well at least I thought it was love at the time. He was charming, charismatic, and handsome to a point. We met on my first day and hit it off right away, he was a year older and gave me a tour of the school. Before I knew it we were dating, and as far as I knew I was completely and utterly in love with him.
Sometimes I wonder if things happen for a reason, if that we must live through terrible ordeals for life to get better. But sometimes it did not seem like that, sometimes it felt that it just seemed to get worse which each passing day. It had been three years since I last heard his laugh, last saw him smile, last heard him call my daddy. Three years since my little boy had been taken away from me at the expense of Tanya's careless mistake. I still remember the day like it was yesterday, it was a rainy afternoon and I was stuck after school looking over the detention for that day. Some of the day students had gotten into a fight during lunch and had been given after school detention. I had called Tanya and asked if she could pick up Emma and Masen was school. She seemed annoyed at first but eventually gave in. I mean they were her own children there wasn't really a reason for her to be annoyed. But she kept claiming that it was my day to pick them up and I owed her.