Hello everyone! This is my first time writing so please go easy on me. First, I know it sucks, so don't continue repeating yourself. Second, even though they are not my favorite couple, this is a SasuHina fic, and don't leave reviews saying "Why SasuHina? They will never be together," I know that already. But who knows? They might get together…maybe… coughsprobablynotcoughs…Lastly, I had first written this story for my friends that had no idea what Naruto is, so if you're expecting any ninja action I suggest you turn back right now. They are normal people leading semi normal lives. Oh! And I know that Hinata's dad is supposed to be alive, but I changed it to her mother. It works better.
Voice from nowhere: Run! Run away while you can! This story is so bad it made my eyes bleed!
Neji'sTrueLover:-Pulls Neji from behind the corner-Neji? Would you do the honors of disclaiming?
Neji: I'd rather die.
Neji'sTrueLover:-Pulls out hidden kunai from nowhere-And how about now?
Neji:-sweatdrops as knife is held to his throat-Neji'sTrueLover does not own any of the characters from Naruto, nor does she own the song Concrete Angel by Martina McBride
Neji'sTrueLover:-smiles sweetly-That's a good Neji
Prologue She walks to school with the lunch she packed…
"Ahhh!" Hinata screams as her small, petite form hits the glass table. Blood covers her clothes and stains the floor around her.
"Get up and clean this mess," Natsume, her mother, says into Hinata's ear. The smell of alcohol stings Hinata's nose as she struggles to get up, but fails miserably.
"Disobey me will you?" Natsume says as she raises up the broken beer bottle, getting ready to strike Hinata again.
"What did I do, Mother?" Hinata asks weakly as she stares at the beer bottle.
"You were born," Natsume says as she brings the bottle down, aiming at Hinata once again.
"Please, stop." Hinata begs as she closes her eyes, already awaiting the impact she is sure was going to come. But before she closes her eyes completely, Hinata sees the horrid bottle aimed straight at her, then…
Neji'sTrueLover: Oooohhhh cliffhanger. I hate these so much, but it needed to be done.
Neji: See that little button down there that says review? Click it and tell my captor what you think. If you do she will let me go…
Neji'sTrueLover: Hahaha he's so funny-throws the tied up Neji into his closet-but pleasereview! I need your feedback!If you liked it and want more, tell me. If you think it sucked also tell me. I need reviews to get better! Otherwise, you all have to continue reading crap. And please don't just say "I really didn't like it." And not tell me why!! If it was bad, tell me where I went wrong (but please don't say that me writing the story is wrong-puppydog eyes-)
I'll try to update every few days, but until I get a beta reader it will probably be longer. I also need at least 2 count them 2 reviews before I will continue the story. I will give you cookies!
Anyway I promise that next time the author's note will not be as long as this one. So until then, Ja ne!