Popular REJECT

"Today the neighborhood, tomorrow the world

Popular girl, popular girl."

A Fanfiction Written By:

Snowflaked Angel

- I am unwritten, can't read my mind, I'm undefined -
- I'm just beginning, the pen's in my hand, ending unplanned -

Dedicated to:

Euphraini & Cute Pukite – DOES ANYONE KNOW WHERE SIGNE-CHAN WENT? DID SHE LEAVE? OR DID SHE CHANGE HER PEN NAME? If you could please let me know through review or message, I would be so thankful.

-You're my all in all-

Full Summary:

Meet Mikan Sakura: Her profile is practically stamped with the huge, red, bold letters that spell , with the help of some rich teens, Mikan Sakura kissed her reject status adieu and was ready to take on school again, with her new gained confidence and charisma… that is, until her parents told her they were transferring her to a different school. Now, Mikan finds herself in the famous private school for the rich and elite: Alice Academy. There, she forms a popular clique, vows to tear down Luna and her cronies by beating the crap out of them in dancing, and somewhere in the fray, fall in love with the man of her dreams. Well, first she has to realize who exactly her real prince charming is. N x M

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Chapter Nine: High-Level Standards ▬

I can feel the pressure, it's getting closer now

"We're better off without you"

I can feel the pressure, it's getting closer now

"We're better off without you"

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"Shaina, honestly, I really don't want to do Rock With You," Asa squeaked.

Shaina glared, then glared some more. "We've been through this a million times, ASA. WE'RE DOING THE SONG NO MATTER WHAT THE HELL YOU SAY."

Asa sank to the floor. "I-I just thought that…?"

"What?" Shaina growled. She paused. "Fine, how does this sound…"


"Mochu, my man!" Koko clapped his buddy's back.

"Koko, honeyyyy…" Mochu blew Koko a kiss.

"What the hell, Mochu."

"Just kidding."

Awkward silence. "You're not gay, right?"

"W-w-w-NO!" Mochu spluttered. He calmed down. "So. What song?"

Koko grinned. "So. You wanna be outrageous or badass?"

"Aren't those the same thing…? I want both, then." Mochu smirked.

Koko's grin grew wider. "Both it is."


Natsume frowned at Youichi, who was staring at a wall with utmost fascination. No, it wasn't the wall that he was thinking about. Youichi was daydreaming, most likely about that Sakura-girl. He clouted Youichi's head and said, "Lift your fat ass off that chair, Youitchy. We've got things to do."

Youichi jerked himself back into reality, almost tipping his chair over. "Oh. Yeah… I mean, okay… gotcha."

Natsume rolled his eyes and shoved Youichi, who shoved him back.

"I'm changing our song," Natsume announced. "Ruka said he might want to use Remember the Name, so, we're changing songs to…"


Mikan slid into the splits and pressed her forehead to the floor, stretching out her body. Luna cleared her throat. "Ahem."

Mikan looked up. "So… Popular. I brought the CD." She reached into her Balenciaga and pulled out the Veronicas' Hook Me Up CD.

Luna snatched the CD out of Mikan's hand and fed it into the CD Player. "Just watch and follow," she said, as she stood in the middle of the room, head down.


Aoi lifted up a CD to show Kiko. "This."

"That's hot."



"I feel bad for telling Natsume that we're going to do Remember the Name… especially when we're not going to do it anymore." Ruka sighed. "Why not, though? Why can't we do Remember the Name?" Kitsuneme asked, picking at the bottom of his ripped shoe. "I thought you wanted to do another song, Kitsu." "That was before… ah, oh well. Why don't you just tell Natsume that he can have the song back?"

"I will."

"UGHGAH!" was the first sound Mikan made when she flew into the room, slamming the door and collapsing in her bed.

"You're late," was all Hotaru said. "School ended at 3, you're here at 5:30. We were wondering where you were." She swung her legs around her purple bed and knocked on the bathroom door that separated their room from Anna and Nonoko's.

Seconds later, the two other members of the Pretty Vanity joined Hotaru on Mikan's bed, trying to comfort her and asking her what's wrong.

Mikan let out another loser-like wail and painstakingly took off her sneakers. She was so distressed that she didn't bother to change after Double H. Mikan just shot straight to her dorm in her dance clothes. Strange.

Anna, Nonoko, and Hotaru—yes, even Hotaru—let out three loud gasps as they saw Mikan's feet, which were blistering and raw. They immediately knew who was responsible for this. Soon, Anna and Nonoko was shouting abuse to Luna, nonstop. Raising their voices, they almost lifted up the roof. Hotaru looked outraged as well and muttered a few of her choicest colorful words and went back to staring at anything other than Mikan's feet.

"How did you manage to get back here? You should've called me!" Hotaru's voice shook a tiny bit at the end.

"Call you? How could I show a moment of weakness to Luna? Hiding the pain almost killed me!" Mikan trembled.


Mikan winced. "She can't stop me. I can do this—"

"How are you going to continue dancing with those feet, Mi-chii?" Anna asked frightfully, afraid of her answer.

"Don't tell me you're going to continue dancing!" Nonoko looked at Mikan's face, which clearly expressed her answer. "No, Mikan, no! You can't!"

"This isn't what I can, or can do. It's what I need, and need to do. And what I want to do. You guys know this." Mikan gazed at her friends' eyes. "You guys know this," she repeated softly.

"Mikan, there's a difference between fighting for your pride and fighting for your future. If you continue dancing with those feet, you might not be able to dance again, if it worsens, which it will, considering Luna's choreography."

"Relax, Nonoko. I'll be fine. Just continue with your side of the plan, alright? Whatever that is." Mikan grinned. "Though, Hotaru, I will be needing some magical healing thing for my feet."

Hotaru looked at Mikan in disbelief. "You know there's no such thing… oh."

Mikan grinned as Hotaru nodded. When they were children, Mikan tripped over a rock and got a huge cut on her foot. Hotaru had her invention carry Mikan to the Imai's house and received some mysterious powder.

Hotaru stood up. "I have to go to my lab to get it."

Mikan nodded. "Thanks, Hotaru…"

She looked over at Anna and Nonoko, who were glancing at each other. They turned to Mikan and said, "We're going out for a bit. Can you rest by yourself?"

"Yeah… where are you guys…?"

They already ran out.

Finally, it was here.

All the students of Double H bordered the room and left the center of the spacious room wide open for the performers. Mikan's heart pounded as she watched each of the beginners try their best at their routines. She stared at her feet, which were wrapped with white cloth bandages over and over. Hotaru, Nonoko, and Anna had put some of their "magic powder" which was an invention of theirs. It was numbing the pain right now. Currently, the last of the intermediates were going up. Looking around, Mikan tossed her hair to the side and took out her slidey phone, hoping Reo wasn't watching her.

MIKAN: sosososososos ! ! ! ! ! ! !

HOTARU: chill. u will be fine mikan

MIKAN: thx for telling me but that wont help…

NONOKO: breathe mi-chan, breathe

ANNA: tey ir vwat

Mikan smiled a little.



NONOKO: omg even 4 u anna that was super fail

ANNA: tey ir vwat tou nah do oy

MIKAN: ……?


Mikan held up her finger in a gimme-a-sec way, her eyes glued to her screen, confused.

ANNA: alsietyheykasdfk!!!! TRY UR BEST YOU CAN DO IT!

NONOKO: wow anna, next time be a lil slower :]

MIKAN: reo taking phone away. ily —heart—

Reo looked absolutely furious. "Sakura, not only did you not obey my orders, but you continued to text after I came to take your phone away. This is unacceptable. MINUS 10 POINTS ON YOUR PROJECT."

Mikan rolled her eyes and crossed her arms, but on the inside, she was worried. Minus 10 points already? Damn it! she thought.

"Now all of our darling intermediates have gone," Reo sneered with ill-disguised sarcasm, "the real show begins. Koko, Mochiage." Reo applauded along with the beginners and intermediates. The advanced students leaned on the wooden railings along the mirrors and whooped. Well, the boys whooped.

Suddenly, the lights turned into pulsing colors of dark red, green, blue…

(A/N: Keep in mind, also for future reference, none of the songs played are the clean versions when they are performed, I just bleeped the cuss words I could see because… well, I don't need the excess. Putting a few cuss words in the dialogue here and there create characterization, in songs, there's just no need in my opinion.)

(Search Jhizz in My Pants – Lonely Island on Youtube)


Mikan could roughly make out two figures in the center, the exact place where the pulsing, circling lights didn't touch… Suddenly, what she recognized as Koko broke free from his and Mochu's frozen stance and the light shined on him. As the singing started, he locked eyes with beginner girl who widened her eyes in a confused kind of way and Koko started prowling forward like a leopard creeping toward its prey. After the regular lights turned completely on, Mika noticed Koko was wearing what seemed like… a one piece swimsuit… over what looked like a flesh-colored body suit…

Lock eyes from across the room
Down my drink while the rhythms boom
Take your hands, skip the names
No need here for the silly games
Make our way through the smoke and crowd
The club is the sky and I'm on your cloud
Move in close as the lasers fly
Our bodies touch and the angels cry

Mikan rolled her eyes as Koko prowled closer and closer to the girl, pausing to act exactly as the lyrics told him to, and whispered something to the poor girl. The girl looked confused but took Koko's hand who led her to the center, where Mochu was showing his talent of moving to the beat. Mochu's toes never moved from the spot he was standing before, but it definitely seemed like he was moving… around. Mikan couldn't describe how awestruck she was, despite the abnormal song…

Leave this place go back to yours
Our lips first touch outside your doors
The whole night what we've got in store
Whisper in my ear that you want some more
And I jizz in my pants

The girl screamed and dropped Koko's hands as he started flailing and his body started vibrating uncontrollably. Mikan's mouth dropped open in horror as Natsume, Ruka, and Kitsuneme burst out laughing, slapping their knees and totally having a fit as Koko thrust his pelvis at the girl. Reo's eyes popped open wider as he sat straighter in his seat, his eyes fixed on Koko with disapproval. Koko winked at his gang of friends and at Mochu, who was snickering while doing his jerking.

This really never happens you can take my word
I won't apologize
That's just absurd
Mainly your fault for the way that you dance
And now I jizz in my pants

Koko actually collapsed on the poor girl who was standing rigid and unable to move. Koko's body thrashed around as the girl kept freaking out and screaming. Mikan felt so sorry for her… The girl started backing away but Koko grabbed her arm and started prowling around her.

Don't tell your friends or I'll say you're a slut
Plus it's your fault
You were rubbing my butt
I'm very sensitive
Some would say that's a plus
Now I'll go home and change

As quick as Koko came on, he left just as quickly, just as Reo looked like he was going to say something to the group. The pulsing lights now focused on Mochu, who finally broke out of stance and started moonwalking across the floor. The innocent girl victim quickly ran back to her friends.

Last week, I saw a film
As I recall it was a horror film
Walked outside into the rain
Checked my phone and saw you rang
And I jizzed in my pants

Speeding in the street, when the red lights flash
Need to get away, need to make a dash
A song comes on that reminds me of you

Natsume, Ruka, and Kitsuneme were in hysterics in their corner. Mikan was awestruck and disgusted at the same time. This was just so typical of Koko… she should have expected this much… but… the way they incorporated their acting skills into their dancing and focusing on their solos was great. But then Mikan heard the keywords:

And I jizz in my pants

Mikan almost vomited as both Koko and Mochu were in action at the same time, contrary to before. Their actions kept interrupting each other—but on purpose, just like the song did. Every time they "vibrated and started flailing" Mikan wanted to look away but she couldn't. There was so much to learn… NOT THE JHIZZING THOUGH.

The next day
My alarm goes off
And I jizz in my pants

Open my window and a breeze rolls in
And I jizz in my pants

When Bruce Willis was dead at the end of Sixth Sense
I jizzed in my pants

I just ate a grape
And I—

"ALRIGHT, BOYS. That's enough." Reo stopped the music and turned on the lights. Oddly, he didn't look angry at all despite his tone. In fact, he high-fived the two before Koko and Mochu went offstage. "Nice work, Koko, Mochiage."

Mikan couldn't believe Reo was congratulating them on their performance, but she had to admit their performance was… definitely unique, and very good.

Reo checked his watch. "Aoi, Kiko, you guys are up!"

(Search Boom Boom Pow – Black Eyed Peas on Youtube)

As the music started and the room turned pitch-black dark, Mikan waited in anticipation. What kind of performance were they going to give?

Gotta get-get, gotta get-get
Gotta get-get, gotta g-g-g-get-get-get, get-get

The two girls started in the same position as Mochu and Koko. Like the electronic-y song, their movements were robotic and their popping was flawless and creative. They were both wearing black beanies, black tight shirts, black baggy pants, black sneakers, but all of them seemed to have a glow-in-the-dark green lightning streak on all of their clothing. The lights turned on in their 10 percent mode, semi-lighting the room.

Boom boom boom, gotta get-get
Boom boom boom, gotta get-get
Boom boom boom, gotta get-get
Boom boom boom, gotta get-get

Boom boom boom, now
Boom boom boom, now
Boom boom pow
Boom boom

Yo, I got that hit that beat the block
You can get that bass overload
I got the that rock and roll
That future flow

Like Koko and Mochu's performance, the two switched off with their "solos". Aoi stepped forward and showed off her moves. Mikan was completely blown away by her dancing. Unlike Mikan, whenever Aoi bumped her chest and body to the beat she didn't look weird, at all. She had amazing fluency with her moves.

When it was Kiko's turn, Mikan noticed that her specialty seemed to be lifting her body off the ground with her two hands because she did that a lot in her routine. Mikan thought she looked pretty unstable a few times, but Kiko didn't fall during her solo. When it came to the climax of the song, the two finally joined together and danced the same moves. Mikan had assumed that Aoi's weakness were the lifts, but now she realized she couldn't have been more mistaken. As the two were in perfect synchronization with their lifting and moving of the feet off the ground, Mikan's mouth was open. As expected of Natsume's sister…

"Looks like Aoi's going to move to second place for the girls if Shaina doesn't do something about it," Asa whispered next to me, her mouth curved up into a smile as she stared at Aoi's black-clad figure. Mikan focused on Aoi's expression, which was as stoic as her brother's, even though she was sweating pretty hard. Kiko was keeping up with Aoi but barely. They needed more practice to work up Kiko's endurance—she was sweating bullets and her mouth was slightly open as she panted.

Let the beat rock

The abrupt ending to the edited song surprised Mikan as the two ended with a bam! in the same position as they started with. Everyone applauded, Mikan being exceptionally loud. Aoi allowed herself to pant and act tired after the performance ended, and slumped next to Mikan while Shaina and Asa prepared for their turn.

"You were amazing, Aoi," Mikan said, smiling.

Aoi looked up at Mikan, panted, then managed a smile back. "Thanks -pant- for the -pant- compliment." Aoi sat on the floor and ripped her beanie off, revealing her sweat. "Ugh -pant- I need a shower… again," she moaned.

Mikan raised her eyebrow. "Again?"

Aoi nodded, leaning her head against the transparent wall. "I've already -pant- showered twice today…"

Mikan was wide-eyed. "Twice? Why? Is your hair that oily?"

Aoi cocked her head at Mikan. "Everyone who dances -pant- intensely sweats a lot. Don't you?"

Mikan frowned. So far she didn't have to deal with that problem. "I never sweated while practicing for my routine…" she muttered.

Aoi frowned too. "Luna must be very nice to you then."

Mikan let out a short-burst of laughter. "Hah. She totally—" but then shut up when she saw Asa and Shaina come up stage, then they separated and went to opposite sides of the room. Mikan cocked her head in confusion as they both laid down with their backs to the floor, hands by their sides.

(Search "X-Way- TiK ToK and then some" on Youtube. At the chorus, that's what most of their footwork is like. The chorus is at: 0:37 seconds into the video. Also, Font CYC's part is very good, but that is what I envisioned as Natsume's level of dancing, not Shaina or Asa's. Aren't they good? I know them :D)

Wake up in the morning feeling like P Diddy
(Hey, what up girl?)
Put my glasses on, I'm out the door - I'm gonna hit this city (Let's go)
Before I leave, brush my teeth with a bottle of Jack
Cause when I leave for the night, I ain't coming back
I'm talking - pedicure on our toes, toes
Trying on all our clothes, clothes
Boys blowing up our phones, phones
Drop-toping, playing our favorite cds
Pulling up to the parties
Trying to get a little bit tipsy

Don't stop, make it pop
DJ, blow my speakers up
Tonight, I'mma fight
'Til we see the sunlight
Tick tock, on the clock
But the party don't stop no
Woah-oh oh oh
Woah-oh oh oh

Though Mikan didn't like the FCUK YEW girl, Shaina, she had to admit that her dancing lived up to her number two ranking in the class. Both of their footwork was amazing, but Shaina looked the most balanced. Asa looked so pretty during her routine—when she spun around, her face went with a surprised expression, like she was interacting with her dancing. If that made any sense. Mikan tried to keep up with their feet, but they were just going and going and going, their heels touching the floor then their toes with the heels up, both feet flat on the ground, toes and toes again, then heals then flat on the round, then spinning around…

Then, Aoi murmured, "C-walking."


"Their footwork—it's called C-walking," Aoi replied, still wiping her sweat from her forehead.

"Wow," was all Mikan could utter. As the song ended with another one of KeSha's annoying "woah-oh-oh-oh-oh"s and flirtatious giggles, Asa struck a diva pose and Shaina rolled her eyes with her hand on her hip.

"WHOOOOOOOOOO!" Mikan cheered as the class applauded.

Reo nodded approvingly. "You've improved," he said to Asa, who smiled.

"Ruka, Kitsuneme!"

"Reo…" Kitsuneme yelled.

Reo looked up from his papers in confusion. Ruka jogged over to him wearing a very loose collar shirt that was unbuttoned half-way, a loose tie that hung like a scarf around his neck, and baggy black sweats. He whispered something to Reo who muttered, "Fine, make it fast."

Mikan inhaled deeply. She was either next, or the last ones to go, which meant after Natsume and Youichi. She shivered, remembering Natsume Hyuuga's words. How could she meet the standards of the Advanced class when they were this freaking high?

Mikan pushed those thoughts away, though. She couldn't afford to think about that now. She had to focus, like an alpha would. Don't be a reject. Live to your expectations. Confidence, Mikan, she said—no, commanded—herself. Suddenly, Mikan heard a knock and her head suddenly hurt. Mikan looked around, thinking something dropped on her. Was Koko throwing things at her again? Then, Aoi pointed to behind Mikan at the transparent glass.

Mikan squeaked with alarm before realizing the head that was pressed up against the glass was Hotaru. "Let me in, stupid," she mouthed, pointed to the door.

Once Hotaru came in and sat next to Mikan, the confusion settled in. "Wait Hotaru, don't you have tech class?" Mikan paused, then her eyes started watering as she stared at Hotaru with idolizing eyes. "Could it be… could it be that you ditched class to watch me, Hotaru? Hotaru? Hotaru, ne, Hota—"

Hotaru promptly thwacked Mikan across the head with her handbag, resulting in Mikan crashing onto Asa's lap.

"Ow! Hotaru!"

Hotaru rolled her eyes. "Lucky for you, we're doing nothing today so I ditched and decided to watch your performance."

"Reo, we're ready," Ruka called out. Hotaru turned away from Mikan and looked at Ruka and smirked. She pulled out her camera and tripod and set it all up in a flash, ready to take dozens of pictures of Ruka Nogi.

Mikan, Aoi, and Asa laughed weakly. Then, the music started.

(Search "George Sampson Britain's Got Talent Final" for my inspiration. Though there is no rain, this song reminds me of it, and umbrellas. Weird, huh? For the song, please search: Aerodynamic (Daft Punk Remix) on Youtube)

Ruka and Kitsuneme started out slow like the beat, which reminded Mikan of falling into a hole in slow motion. As the drums picked up, Ruka and Kitsuneme procured huge black umbrellas out of nowhere and spun around with them open. They reminded Mikan of old Broadway musicals.

You know we're gonna do it right
Just feeling
You just got me feeling the need

Everyone could tell that lots of emotion was put into their dancing. Mikan was almost reminded of ballet when they stretched out one of their arms and spun around.

Come on
All right

Their popping with their umbrellas had a unique effect—especially with the umbrellas in one of their hands. Their moves were exactly the same, at the exactly the same time, in perfect, flawless synchronization. The way they spun around was sort of like ballroom dancing, just with one person—large, big steps that led in a circle with the occasional abrupt freeze and popping. Mikan glanced at Hotaru, who was taking pictures frantically.

We're gonna celebrate
One more time
Celebrate and dance so free

You just got me feeling so free
Celebrate and dance so free
One more time

There were just so many fluid body motions that they reminded Mikan of rain...

You just got me feeling so free
We're gonna celebrate
Celebrate and dance so free

Suddenly, Ruka and Kitsuneme threw their umbrellas to the back in one lightning-fast fluid motion. The umbrellas floated in the sky for a moment like a hot-air balloon before settling perfectly on the ground and tilting over. Hotaru's finger on the shutter paused for a second.

One more time

Suddenly, the electronic instrumental picked up and they immediately flipped over and demonstrated perfect suicide moves, which were usually used at the end of a routine where you flip over in various different ways and "die". Ruka and Kitsuneme weren't done with their routine though. They flipped over, lifted up their feet, and did one swivel after another, copying each other's moves perfectly. They had amazing footwork while supporting their body with two hands, which was so complicated and hard. Mikan was anxious to see her best friend's reaction, and was not disappointed. Hotaru was completely frozen, her eyes marveling at the routine the two boys were doing in front of her.

As the instrumental turned scratchy and upped the tempo, the boys struggled totime their feet to the fast beat while swiveling. When the music stopped being scratchy and returned to the electronic instrumental, Kitsuneme broke free from the swiveling and supported himself with a two-hand handstand while Ruka persevered and kept going with the swiveling and flipping of his body over and over to restart his swiveling at the beat of the music. Every time a beat was heard, he would flip and swivel. "Wow," Mikan whispered.

As the music started slowing down and didn't have drum beats anymore, Ruka and Koko laid on the ground. They slowly stretched out their arm, then the other slowly to the beat, then started popping on the ground. It was a sight to behold. Everyone was on their tip-toes to catch a good look at them. Reo actually stood up and walked over to the boys to get a closer look. The song ended with Ruka and Kitsuneme flipping to face each other on the floor and "dying" with wide-open eyes.

"Creepy…" Mikan whispered.

"They are amazing," Asa said with huge eyes.

"Hotaru, what do you think?" Mikan asked.

Hotaru's mouth was slightly open as she regarded Ruka and Kitsuneme. "That was something… I had not seen before," she finally admitted. "Bunny Boy and smiley number 2 aren't bad."

Mikan cracked a smile. "That's a huge compliment, coming from you Hotaru. I'm absolutely amazed and appalled!"

The Double H students cheered as Ruka and Kitsuneme sat back next to Natsume and their gang, panting and smiling. Then, the two quickly tore off their collared shirts and basked in the cooling air on their burning skin. Mikan saw Hotaru's face twitch from her peripheral vision.

Mikan faced Hotaru with a teasing smile. "You're marveling at their six-pack's, aren't you, Hotaru?"

Hotaru attempted to thwack Mikan again, but this time she evaded it.


Mikan Sakura evaded Hotaru's thwacks?

Has the world gone mad?

Is Mikan Sakura finally becoming smart?

Or are Hotaru's skills just rusty?

Mikan stuck her tongue out at Hotaru, who muttered, "I wasn't looking at Nogi's abs."

Mikan's mouth dropped open a little bit, then winked at Hotaru. "You know, Hotaruuu, I said 'their' abs, not Ruka's abs. It seems…" Mikan smugly inspected her fingernails, "that you were too busy thinking about something else…"


Of the century.

Mikan flew out of the window and out the NBD and whizzed past trees and—

Well, that didn't happen, but it seriously hurt. And that was never a good sign, especially when you were about to perform.

"Luna, Sakura, get your butts up there, we haven't got much time left," Reo barked, glaring at Mikan for howling from the pain.

Speak of the devil.

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Author's Comments:

Well, I've finally made my mind guys. I'm going to finish this story. Obviously, the other chapters won't be as "quick" as this one came out (spent 3 days making thing, totally neglecting my schoolwork and piano and social life), so, I'm ashamed of saying this, but be patient. Onto the chapter! How was it? Was it utterly ridiculous? Do you have no idea of what the dances are like at all? It's insanely hard trying to describe a subject I have no experience with in so much detail, so I tried to provide videos that looked like what I envisioned, etc. Please look at those videos; they are there for a reason. And always listen to the music while reading the dance and imagining it. Always helps.

Sorry about the grammar and spelling and punctuation mistakes, I really wanted to get this chapter up. Please let me know if you catch a big big writer-FAIL mistake. XD Which happens a lot to me, sadly.

I don't see this as a cliffhanger, well maybe it's because it's 12:30AM and I usually sleep at 11 on school days. And it's a school day. But I really wanted to finish this damn chapter. Grr high school. Boo. Anyway, I hope you enjoy and review. Unlucky Girl will sadly be unfinished as of now. I'm not saying I might change my mind, but I'm opening that possibility. Though it's not very likely.

An important note: MISSING: Cute Pukite (formerly known as Pukite) do you guys know what her new username is? I've lost touch with her… her name's Signe-chan~Thanks in advanced.

Thanks for supporting and understanding me (well, most of you--actually, all of you, in your own way :D),

-Geena/Snowflaked Angel

P.S. Sorry long author's comment thing this chapter, but there's been a lot of drama on FFN lately I've noticed. Stealing story ideas or even word by word text is the dominant cause of the silly drama. Please, do not be the one who makes the mistake and causes unnecessary drama. If need be, get advice from the author you admire instead of making a bad bad choice of copying and plagiarizing. Do we have an agreement? FFN states it as their rules, so please follow them. Also, if by any chance there is someone stealing my stories or ideas, please let me know… but don't… how should I put this, do anything rash, like flame them or whatever. I would like to resolve it… peacefully if possible.

Sorry for babbling! Good night, and goodbye!