These are the lyrics of a song my cousin wrote. He thought they were terrible but I thought they weren't too bad considering it was his first try, so we have a bet. I'm putting the lyrics here and if the majority of the reviews are good, I win; if not, he wins. It's not Twilight-related, just a song but I put it under Twilight anyways; sorry. So please read this and then leave a review even if it just says "good" or "bad". Thank you!!

VERSE 1

Watching the sunset, I'm writing a song.

Sitting on the front porch steps, trying to get it right but only getting' wrong.

I scratch out another line and sing a few notes,

Wondering what is worth singing about.

CHORUS

So, tell me what you live for?

What do we have worth fighting for?

We get up and face a new day, but what do we do it for?

We find the strength within ourselves to fight, to love, and to forgive.

But tell me what we live for?

VERSE 2

I look at the page,

Covered in letters and scribbles, but words are just words.

Singing a song is painting a picture for someone using music.

What picture would you paint?

What words could you use to describe your life?

CHORUS

So, tell me what you live for?

What do we have worth fighting for?

We get up and face a new day, but what do we do it for?

We find the strength within ourselves to fight, to love, and to forgive.

But tell me what we live for?

I think there is supposed to be a third verse but he hasn't told it to me :( Please review! He wants the criticism because it's his first song, so tell the truth but don't be too harsh! By the way, I like verse two :D Thanks again.