Apologies if anyone has alerted this story, or any of the people who watch me, cos this is just a replacement chapter. Thank you to the reviewer "a very impressed teacher" for pointing out to me that if I keep this piece of school work up, if it is moderated, this story will come up and they'll think I'm cheating. To avoid this, I am momentarily deleting this story. However, after all the lovely reviews I have received recently, I am putting this in its place. Rest assured, after my GCSEs I will re-post this, but with any mistakes edited out, to save annoyance when reading.
Thank you to all the people who have read and enjoyed this, and I hope you don't mind this small problem. I want to get credited for this in my English coursework, cos I worked hard on it.